Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but needs improvement in grammar and sentence structure to sound more natural. Try to start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incorrect phrases like "Is I'm pretty". Also, use consistent tense and correct prepositions.

Example: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember numbers, dates, and even faces of people I met years ago. This ability has improved because I regularly play memory games, which help boost my memory in daily life.

Suggestion: Your answer shows emotion but needs clearer structure and grammar. Start with a direct answer, then explain with specific details using linking words. Avoid awkward phrases like "do make them make it up there". Use correct tense and prepositions to improve clarity and naturalness.

Example: Yes, I have forgotten something important once. For instance, I missed my parents' anniversary, which made me feel very guilty because they are my biggest supporters. After that, I apologised sincerely and promised to make it up to them.

Suggestion: Your answer contains relevant content but is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details with linking words. Avoid confusing phrases like "although I have two remain". Use simple, correct sentences to express your ideas naturally.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember many things such as my class schedule and conferences. For example, I attend several classes by foreign authors every day for my research work because I am a scholar.

Suggestion: Your answer has good points but needs better organisation and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like "I return on the calendar dates". Use correct verb tenses and prepositions for natural speech.

Example: I usually remember important things by using my cell phone. For instance, I set alarms and reminders on the calendar app. However, I also rely on my sharp memory, so I rarely forget anything.

× Is I'm pretty.

✓ I'm pretty good.

The original sentence 'Is I'm pretty.' is structurally incorrect. The correct form is 'I'm pretty good.' which properly uses the subject 'I' with the verb 'am' and the adjective 'pretty good' to express ability.

× Fantastic in memorizing the things and I also remembered the number and the dates.

✓ Fantastic at memorizing things and I also remember numbers and dates.

The phrase 'Fantastic in memorizing' should be 'Fantastic at memorizing' because 'at' is the correct preposition to indicate skill. Also, 'the things' is vague and unnecessary; 'things' suffices. 'Remembered' should be 'remember' to maintain present tense consistency.

× I also remembered the number and the dates.

✓ I also remember numbers and dates.

The phrase 'the number and the dates' mixes singular and plural unnecessarily. It is better to use plural 'numbers and dates' to indicate multiple items, and maintain present tense 'remember' for consistency.

× Although I remembered the people and the faces even after 10 years, I used to play memory games which helped me to improve and boost my memories in daily ways.

✓ Although I remember people and faces even after 10 years, I used to play memory games which helped me improve and boost my memory in daily life.

The phrase 'I remembered' should be 'I remember' to express a general ability. 'Helped me to improve' is better as 'helped me improve' without 'to'. 'Memories' should be 'memory' as an uncountable noun. 'In daily ways' is better expressed as 'in daily life'.

× Yes Sir, once I forgot my parents anniversary which makes me guilty for the rest of the day's becauses they are the real supporters and hero of my family of my life.

✓ Yes Sir, once I forgot my parents' anniversary which made me feel guilty for the rest of the day because they are the real supporters and heroes of my family and my life.

'Makes' should be 'made' to match past tense 'forgot'. 'Day's' should be 'day' without apostrophe. 'Becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. 'Parents anniversary' needs possessive apostrophe: 'parents''. 'Hero' should be plural 'heroes' to agree with 'supporters'. 'Of my family of my life' is awkward; better as 'of my family and my life'.

× And after that I apologize and promise to do make them make it up there for them.

✓ And after that I apologized and promised to make it up to them.

The sentence has incorrect verb forms and redundant phrases. 'Apologize' and 'promise' should be past tense 'apologized' and 'promised' to match past context. 'Do make them make it up there for them' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'make it up to them'.

× There are many things I have to remember in my daily life like schedule of my classes along with the conferences and there are so many foreign author classes which I have to attend on the daily purpose for my research work 'cause I'm a scholar, although I have two remain.

✓ There are many things I have to remember in my daily life like the schedule of my classes along with conferences, and there are many foreign author classes which I have to attend daily for my research work because I'm a scholar, although I have two remaining.

Added 'the' before 'schedule' for specificity. Removed 'the' before 'conferences' as it is plural and general. 'On the daily purpose' is incorrect; 'daily' suffices. 'Cause' should be 'because' for formality. 'I have two remain' should be 'I have two remaining' to use correct participle form.

× Mostly remember important things by my cell phone.

✓ I mostly remember important things by using my cell phone.

The original sentence lacks a subject and proper verb form. Adding 'I' as subject and 'by using' clarifies the method of remembering.

× I used to have some alarms.

✓ I set some alarms.

'Used to have' implies past habit, but here present tense is better. 'Set alarms' is the correct collocation for activating alarms.

× Along with that I return on the calendar dates.

✓ Along with that, I rely on calendar dates.

'Return on the calendar dates' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'rely on calendar dates'. Added comma after 'Along with that' for clarity.

× Although I rely on my memory which is quite sharp so I don't forget anything along with that.

✓ I rely on my memory, which is quite sharp, so I don't forget anything.

'Although' and 'so' are conjunctions that conflict here. Removing 'Although' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity. Added commas around the relative clause.

× I used to have some reminders in my phone.

✓ I have some reminders on my phone.

'Used to have' implies past habit; present tense 'have' is better. The correct preposition is 'on' for devices like phones.