Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Покращте граматику та структуру речень, уникайте надмірної повторюваності та використовуйте більш точні слова. Наприклад, замість 'I notice it that' краще сказати 'I have noticed that'.

Example: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. I have noticed that I can remember important information well, although some people, like my wife, are even better and faster at it.

Suggestion: Покращте граматику, уникайте незрозумілих фраз і надавайте конкретні приклади. Використовуйте зв'язки для логічності.

Example: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, just like anyone else. However, I use reminders and notes to help me remember important events or tasks.

Suggestion: Покращте граматику та чіткість висловлювань, уникайте незрозумілих фраз. Використовуйте повні речення з логічними зв'язками.

Example: Usually, I need to remember my to-do list and also to take care of my dad's wireless device. Additionally, I keep track of which of my work tasks have not been accepted yet.

Suggestion: Покращте граматику та зв'язність речень, уникайте повторів. Використовуйте більш точні слова і логічні зв'язки.

Example: I concentrate really hard when I need to remember something important. Additionally, I sometimes make notes or set alarms on my phone, which I check every day to help me remember important tasks.

× I notice it that I can remember important seeing things or informations.

✓ I notice that I can remember important things or information.

The word 'informations' is incorrect because 'information' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Also, 'seeing things' is unclear and unnecessary here; 'things' suffices.

× Better and faster is another people.

✓ Other people are better and faster.

'People' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'another people' is incorrect; 'other people' is the correct phrase.

× I notice it this through my wife.

✓ I noticed this through my wife.

The phrase 'notice it this' is incorrect; it should be 'noticed this'. Also, 'through my wife' is acceptable but 'from my wife' might be clearer. The verb tense is corrected to past tense to match context.

× I can forgot something important like anyone else.

✓ I can forget something important like anyone else.

'Can' is a modal verb and should be followed by the base form of the verb, so 'forgot' is incorrect; it should be 'forget'.

× But I have some presents and Elsa Mitotic's how I can remember this important scene.

✓ But I have some presents and also methods on how I can remember this important scene.

The phrase 'Elsa Mitotic's' is unclear and likely a mishearing or misspelling. Replacing it with 'also methods' makes the sentence clearer. 'Presents' may be intended as 'presence' or 'presents' but context suggests 'methods' or 'ways'.

× Usually I need remember my To Do List also my dad wireless.

✓ Usually I need to remember my To Do List and also my dad's wireless.

The verb 'need' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb: 'need to remember'. Also, 'my dad wireless' should be 'my dad's wireless' to show possession.

× Also what of my works not accepted?

✓ Also, which of my works are not accepted?

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Adding 'which' and the verb 'are' clarifies the question.

× I just need concentrated really on this thing.

✓ I just need to concentrate really on this thing.

After 'need', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to concentrate', not the past participle 'concentrated'.

× For remembering.

✓ To remember.

'For remembering' is a fragment and does not form a complete sentence. 'To remember' is the correct infinitive form to express purpose.

× But sometimes I do some notes or alarms that I have on my VO that that I can see every day and this helps me to remember important things.

✓ But sometimes I make some notes or set alarms on my phone that I can see every day, and this helps me remember important things.

'Do some notes' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make some notes'. 'VO' is unclear; 'phone' is a better assumption. Also, 'that that' is a repetition error. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.