Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy. Try to be more direct and use correct prepositions, for example, say 'good at memorizing' instead of 'good in memorizing'. Also, avoid filler words like 'like' and unnecessary phrases such as 'I like it too much'. Keep your answer concise and natural.

Example: I'm not very good at memorising things in general, but I have a personal skill for remembering people's names, which I really enjoy.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and provides specific details with good linking words like 'for example' and 'because'. To improve, try to avoid repeating similar ideas such as 'forgotten my important things' and 'especially my room key' by being more precise from the start. Also, use correct articles like 'my room key' instead of 'my important things'.

Example: Yes, I often forget my room key. For example, I sometimes leave it inside my room by mistake, which frustrates me because I have to wait for someone to help me get in. This happens quite often, so I'm trying to be more careful.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid unnecessary words like 'Quietly' and repeated words like 'I I'. Use correct verb forms such as 'I usually make notes' instead of 'I usually makes'. Also, clarify phrases like 'Cineworld copy' which is confusing. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

Example: I find it difficult to remember things, so I usually make notes to help me. Additionally, I practice meditation and yoga to improve my mental skills.

Suggestion: Your answer has some good points but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct verb forms like 'I also make notes' instead of 'I also makes Rd. north of it'. Avoid unclear expressions such as 'Rd. north of it'. Also, use linking words like 'Besides' or 'In addition' to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I remember important things by practicing meditation and yoga, which help improve my mental skills. Besides, I also make notes and mark important dates on my calendar.

× Oh well I'm not very good in memorizing but I am good at like memorizing the name of the people.

✓ Oh well I'm not very good at memorizing but I am good at memorizing the names of people.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at' not 'in'. Also, 'the name of the people' should be pluralized to 'the names of people' to be grammatically correct.

× Oh well I'm not very good in memorizing but I am good at like memorizing the name of the people.

✓ Oh well I'm not very good at memorizing but I am good at memorizing the names of people.

'Name' should be plural 'names' because it refers to multiple people. Also, 'the people' is better as 'people' without 'the' in this context.

× Like it's my a personal skill.

✓ Like it's a personal skill of mine.

The phrase 'my a personal skill' is incorrect because 'my' and 'a' cannot be used together. It should be 'a personal skill of mine' to express possession correctly.

× I like it too much.

✓ I like it very much.

'Too much' implies excessiveness and often a negative connotation, whereas 'very much' correctly expresses strong liking.

× Yes, I have forgotten my important things, especially my room key.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten important things, especially my room key.

The phrase 'my important things' is awkward; 'important things' without 'my' is more natural here.

× For example, I often leave it inside my room by mistake, which makes me feel quite frustrated because I have to wait for someone to help me get in.

✓ For example, I often leave it inside my room by mistake, which makes me feel quite frustrated because I have to wait for someone to help me get in.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× Quietly I I remember things not easy as I earlier mentioned that I am not good in remembering things.

✓ Honestly, I do not remember things easily as I mentioned earlier that I am not good at remembering things.

'Quietly' is incorrect here; 'Honestly' fits better. Also, 'not easy' should be 'not easily' to modify the verb. 'Not good in remembering' should be 'not good at remembering'.

× So I usually makes a note Cineworld copy to remember the things and also I did meditations and yoga to improve my mental skill.

✓ So I usually make a note or copy to remember things and also I do meditation and yoga to improve my mental skills.

The verb 'makes' should be 'make' to agree with the subject 'I'. 'Did meditations' should be 'do meditation' for habitual action. 'Mental skill' should be plural 'mental skills'.

× I remember important things by doing meditation and yoga.

✓ I remember important things by doing meditation and yoga.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× It helped me to improve my mental skills.

✓ It helps me to improve my mental skills.

Since the context is habitual or current, present tense 'helps' is appropriate instead of past tense 'helped'.

× Apart from it, sometimes I also makes Rd. north of it and sometimes I marked on calendar as well.

✓ Apart from that, sometimes I also make notes about it and sometimes I mark it on the calendar as well.

'Makes' should be 'make' to agree with 'I'. 'Marked' should be 'mark' for habitual action. 'Rd. north of it' is unclear; assuming 'make notes about it' is intended. Also, 'marked on calendar' should be 'mark it on the calendar'.