Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Ответ должен быть более естественным и структурированным. Избегайте повторений и неясных выражений, таких как "what culture said to me during the trainings". Лучше дать конкретный пример, чтобы сделать ответ более содержательным.

Example: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I often remember important advice from my parents and lessons from my training sessions, which helps me in daily life.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения, например, "stations like this". Следует использовать связующие слова для логичности и более чётко описать ситуацию, избегая разрывов в предложениях.

Example: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once forgot my friend's birthday, which was a really bad experience for me, but luckily we made up later.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит ошибки и неясные выражения, например, "I need room to remember". Следует использовать более точные слова и структурировать ответ с помощью связующих слов, чтобы сделать его более понятным и логичным.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember my tasks, such as homework, what to bring to my training sessions, and how much time I have to complete these activities.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки, например, "I have a good memorized". Следует использовать правильные выражения и связующие слова для плавности речи, а также более чётко объяснить методы запоминания.

Example: I have a good memory, but if something is really important, I try to write it down so I don't forget it, and this method helps me a lot.

× I think every person had the stations like this.

✓ I think every person has had situations like this.

The sentence refers to experiences that people have had up to now, so the present perfect tense 'has had' is appropriate instead of simple past 'had'. This tense indicates an experience relevant to the present.

× I forgot about my friends birthday.

✓ I forgot about my friend's birthday.

The word 'friends' should be in the singular possessive form 'friend's' to indicate the birthday belongs to one friend. Without the apostrophe, it is plural, which is incorrect here.

× I need room to remember what I need to do, what homework I should do, what I should take to my trainings and how much time I need to do this things.

✓ I need to remember what I need to do, what homework I should do, what I should take to my trainings, and how much time I need to do these things.

The phrase 'I need room to remember' is incorrect; it should be 'I need to remember'. Also, 'this things' is incorrect; the correct plural demonstrative pronoun is 'these things'.

× I try to write it down not to forget about it and it helps to me.

✓ I try to write it down not to forget it and it helps me.

The phrase 'forget about it' is better as 'forget it' in this context. Also, 'helps to me' is incorrect; the verb 'help' is followed directly by the object without 'to'.