Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Example: I think my ability to memorise depends on the situation. For example, I am good at remembering personal memories from my childhood, but I find it harder to memorise school lessons.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách nối câu để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn và sử dụng từ nối để liên kết ý.

Example: Actually, I have never forgotten anything important because I always note important occasions in my phone and set alarms to remind me.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề để trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, such as the time to cook meals for my family. Also, I have to remind myself to study and go to school on time.

Suggestion: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và dễ hiểu hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề, bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

Example: To remember important things, I usually use technology by saving important dates and tasks on my phone. Additionally, I ask my relatives to remind me if they are free.

× All I think it depends on the situation.

✓ I think it all depends on the situation.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing subject-verb agreement. 'I think it all depends' is the correct present tense structure to express opinion.

× I feel that I really good at memorize some memories of my life like in when I was when I was a child,

✓ I feel that I am really good at memorizing some memories of my life, like when I was a child,

The sentence lacks the verb 'am' after 'I' and uses 'memorize' instead of the gerund 'memorizing' after 'good at'. Also, 'in when I was when I was a child' is redundant and incorrect.

× but I done good at memorize the lesson at school.

✓ but I was good at memorizing the lessons at school.

'Done' is incorrect past participle here; 'was' is the correct past tense of 'be'. Also, 'memorize' should be 'memorizing' after 'good at', and 'lesson' should be plural 'lessons'.

× Actually, no, because all of my important occasion in my life, I always note it in my phone and.

✓ Actually, no, because all of the important occasions in my life, I always note them in my phone and

'Occasion' should be plural 'occasions' to match 'all of'. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to multiple occasions.

× Set an alarm to remind me to do it so I have never forgotten something important.

✓ I set an alarm to remind me to do it, so I have never forgotten anything important.

The original sentence lacks a subject in the first clause and uses 'something' instead of 'anything' in negative context.

× In my daily life I have to remember a lot of things such as I need to remember the time to cook for my cooks, lunch and dinner for my family and I also have to remember that M to remind my product to study and go to school.

✓ In my daily life, I have to remember a lot of things, such as the time to cook meals, lunch and dinner for my family, and I also have to remember to remind my children to study and go to school.

'Cooks' is incorrect; it should be 'meals'. 'That M to remind my product' is unclear and corrected to 'to remind my children'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Two remember important things I usually use are usually tecnol the important occasion on the work have to do in my phone and I also asked for my related to remind me if they. Of free.

✓ To remember important things, I usually use technology to note important occasions and work I have to do on my phone, and I also ask my relatives to remind me if they are free.

The original sentence has multiple errors including misspellings ('tecnol' to 'technology'), missing words, and unclear phrases. It is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.