Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

Example: I'm not very good at memorising things, but I can remember some events from a long time ago, like things that happened in secondary school.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời không rõ nghĩa và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, nêu ví dụ cụ thể và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh.

Example: Yes, I have forgotten some important events, such as my girlfriend's birthday, which made me feel really sorry.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích cụ thể những việc cần nhớ trong ngày.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember my tasks and appointments to manage my time effectively.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, từ vựng phù hợp và giải thích rõ cách bạn ghi chú.

Example: For important things, I usually write notes in my notebook to help me remember and remind me to do them on time.

× Not really. But I would say that I am. Able I am able to remember something that happened in a long time before, even in the secondary school.

✓ Not really. But I would say that I am able to remember something that happened a long time ago, even in secondary school.

The original sentence has fragmented and misplaced phrases causing sentence structure errors. 'Able I am able' is redundant and incorrectly ordered. Also, 'in a long time before' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a long time ago'. 'The secondary school' should be 'secondary school' without 'the' as it refers to school in general.

× To be on leaves in I have gotten some important events in my life, for example my girlfriend's birthday. Eyes so.

✓ I have forgotten some important events in my life, for example, my girlfriend's birthday.

The original sentence is incoherent and contains incorrect phrases like 'To be on leaves in' and 'Eyes so'. The intended meaning is about forgetting past events, so 'I have forgotten' is the correct past tense form. The rest of the sentence is simplified for clarity.

× In my day-to-day life I could not what I have to do. Within a day. In order in order to do something effectively.

✓ In my day-to-day life, I sometimes forget what I have to do within a day in order to do things effectively.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clarity. 'I could not what I have to do' is incomplete and incorrect. The correction adds 'sometimes forget' to express the intended meaning and combines the fragments into a coherent sentence.

× For some important things. I often take notes in my notebook to ramp to remember something important thing an remind me to do. On time.

✓ For some important things, I often take notes in my notebook to help me remember important things and remind me to do them on time.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'to ramp to remember' and 'an remind me to do'. The correction restructures the sentence for clarity and correct grammar, using 'help me remember' and 'remind me to do them'.