Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 많으며, 중복된 표현이 있습니다. 문장을 명확하고 간결하게 구성하고, 주제 문장과 추가 설명을 논리적으로 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: Actually, I'm not very good at memorising things. As I get older, it becomes more difficult for me. Therefore, I try to use other methods like writing notes to help me remember important information.

Suggestion: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 있으며, 연결어 사용이 부족합니다. 간결하고 자연스러운 문장으로 직접 질문에 답하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: No, I have never forgotten anything important because I always write down important information. This helps me remember and avoid forgetting important tasks.

Suggestion: 답변이 단편적이고 문장이 완성되지 않은 부분이 있습니다. 주제 문장으로 시작하고, 구체적인 이유와 방법을 연결어를 사용해 자연스럽게 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: I always carry my diary with me wherever I go. I use it to write down my daily plans, so I don't forget important tasks or appointments.

Suggestion: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 주제 문장과 구체적인 방법을 명확하게 연결하여 자연스럽고 논리적으로 말하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: As I mentioned earlier, I remember important things by writing short memos in my diary and using post-it notes. This method helps me recall important information easily.

× As time goes by, I'm getting older than before I'm not good at.

✓ As time goes by, I'm getting older and I'm not as good as before.

The original sentence lacks proper conjunction and structure, making it unclear. The phrase 'I'm not good at' is incomplete and misplaced. The correction connects ideas properly and uses the present continuous tense correctly.

× Worse than before.

✓ I am worse than before at memorizing things.

The original is a fragment without a subject or verb. It needs to be a complete sentence to convey the meaning clearly.

× So instead of I, instead of memorizing, I started.

✓ So instead of memorizing, I started doing something else.

The original sentence is incomplete and confusing. It lacks clarity about what the student started doing. The correction completes the sentence logically.

× I've never forgotten something important yet.

✓ I've never forgotten anything important yet.

The word 'something' is less appropriate in negative sentences; 'anything' is preferred. Also, 'yet' is used with present perfect to indicate up to now.

× Because I always memorized.

✓ Because I always memorize.

The student is talking about a habitual action, so present tense 'memorize' is appropriate rather than past tense 'memorized'.

× Ah, I always write something important to memorize.

✓ Ah, I always write down important things to help me memorize them.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. The correction clarifies the purpose of writing and uses proper verb forms.

× This it.

✓ That's why I haven't forgotten anything yet.

'This it' is not a correct sentence. The correction provides a proper concluding sentence.

× To go anywhere.

✓ I bring it wherever I go.

'To go anywhere' is a fragment and does not form a complete sentence. The correction completes the thought.

× To write some plans for my daily life.

✓ I use it to write some plans for my daily life.

The original is a fragment. The correction makes it a complete sentence.

× That's why I don't forget to do something important to my life.

✓ That's why I don't forget to do important things in my life.

The phrase 'to do something important to my life' is awkward. The correction uses a more natural expression.

× Instead of I can't.

✓ Instead, I don't forget.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence.

× As I told you before, I always memorize.

✓ As I told you before, I always memorize things.

The verb 'memorize' needs an object to complete the meaning.

× Becauses of writing were memo short memo in my diary were posted using post it.

✓ Because I write short memos in my diary and post them using Post-it notes.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects grammar.

× That's why I can memorize world remember that it.

✓ That's why I can memorize and remember things.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence.