Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and contains irrelevant or unclear phrases like 'the llama wrote learner'. Try to give a direct and clear response with a topic sentence, followed by supporting details. Avoid filler words and ensure your sentences are coherent and natural.

Example: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember important dates and facts for my studies, which helps me perform well in exams.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and has grammatical errors like 'didn't really. 'Cause me any trouble'. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: Yes, I have forgotten some important things before. However, luckily, these instances did not cause me much trouble because I usually double-check my belongings.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more structured and precise. Use a topic sentence and then add specific examples with linking words to make your response coherent and natural.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember essential items like my keys, bag, and handkerchief. Sometimes, I forget these things, especially when I am in a hurry.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but contains some unclear words like 'senchal'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and correct minor grammatical errors.

Example: When I know I am running late, I make a list of all the essential items I need to carry. Then, I quickly check the list to ensure I have everything before leaving.

× I mean, I would say it would be inhuman if you don't forgot anything.

✓ I mean, I would say it would be inhuman if you don't forget anything.

The verb 'forgot' is the past tense form, but after 'don't' (do not), the base form of the verb should be used. So, 'don't forgot' is incorrect; it should be 'don't forget'. This is a common error where past tense is mistakenly used after 'do not'.

× So yes, I have forgotten few of them.

✓ So yes, I have forgotten a few of them.

The phrase 'few' without an article implies 'not many' and is usually used in negative contexts. To express a small number positively, 'a few' should be used. Hence, 'few' should be corrected to 'a few' to indicate some forgotten things.

× I sometimes forgot these things.

✓ I sometimes forget these things.

The adverb 'sometimes' indicates habitual action, which requires the present tense. 'Forgot' is past tense and does not fit here. Therefore, 'forgot' should be changed to 'forget' to correctly express habitual forgetting.

× Whenever I know why I'm running late to somewhere, I tried to make a list.

✓ Whenever I know why I'm running late somewhere, I try to make a list.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary before 'somewhere' because 'somewhere' already implies a place. Also, 'tried' is past tense but the context suggests a habitual action, so 'try' (present tense) is appropriate.

× Of all my senchal items that I need to carry with me.

✓ Of all my essential items that I need to carry with me.

The word 'senchal' is incorrect and seems to be a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'essential'. Correcting it to 'essential' makes the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× So when I'm in a hurry, I would just go through.

✓ So when I'm in a hurry, I just go through.

The phrase 'when I'm in a hurry' indicates a habitual action, so the simple present tense 'go' is appropriate instead of 'would go', which is conditional or past habitual.