Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as 'I fold were healthy diet'. To improve, focus on clear sentence structure and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, for example, 'For instance, I often remember important dates because I maintain a healthy diet with natural supplements daily, which I believe helps improve my concentration and memory.'

Example: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, I often remember important dates because I maintain a healthy diet with natural supplements daily, which I believe helps improve my concentration and memory.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has several grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions, such as 'when and when I go' and 'requested one of my friends were only payment'. To improve, try to form clear and complete sentences, and use linking words to explain the sequence of events logically. For example, 'Yes, once I forgot my purse at home when I went to the petrol pump to fill my bike. I faced many issues, but fortunately, I asked a friend to help me with the payment.'

Example: Yes, once I forgot my purse at home when I went to the petrol pump to fill my bike. I faced many issues, but fortunately, I asked a friend to help me with the payment.

Suggestion: Your answer covers relevant points but has grammatical errors and incomplete sentences, such as 'I would like to include the.' To improve, ensure your sentences are complete and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'I need to remember many things daily, especially my morning exercises and homework schedules, because forgetting them could lead to punishment the next day.'

Example: I need to remember many things daily, especially my morning exercises and homework schedules, because forgetting them could lead to punishment the next day.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors like 'mine mobile's calendar'. To improve, complete your sentences and use clear linking words. For example, 'I usually remember important things by scheduling them on my mobile's calendar, setting alarms, and highlighting the dates. Additionally, I make notes to ensure I don't forget.'

Example: I usually remember important things by scheduling them on my mobile's calendar, setting alarms, and highlighting the dates. Additionally, I make notes to ensure I don't forget.

× Definitely, I'm good at memorizing things as I have sharp mind and strong memory.

✓ Definitely, I'm good at memorizing things as I have a sharp mind and strong memory.

The phrase 'sharp mind' requires an article 'a' before the singular noun 'mind' to be grammatically correct in English.

× For example, I often remember important dates and I fold were healthy diet with natural supplements at home on my daily basis which I believe helps me improve my concentration and memory form.

✓ For example, I often remember important dates and I follow a healthy diet with natural supplements at home on my daily basis which I believe helps me improve my concentration and memory.

The word 'fold' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'follow' when talking about adhering to a diet. Also, 'were' is incorrect and should be removed. The phrase 'memory form' is incorrect and should be 'memory'.

× Yes, I remember once I forgot my purse at my home when and when I go for the petrol pump for filling my bike.

✓ Yes, I remember once I forgot my purse at my home when I went to the petrol pump to fill my bike.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Go' should be changed to past tense 'went' to match 'forgot'. Also, 'for filling my bike' is better expressed as 'to fill my bike'. The phrase 'when and when' is redundant and should be simplified to 'when'.

× Oh I get a lot of issues and then I requested one of my friends were only payment which helped them in that situation.

✓ Oh, I had a lot of issues and then I requested one of my friends to make the payment, which helped me in that situation.

The sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Get' should be past tense 'had' to match the past context. 'Were only payment' is incorrect; it should be 'to make the payment'. Also, 'helped them' should be 'helped me' to reflect the correct subject. Commas are added for clarity.

× Well, there are a lot of things I remember on my daily basis, especially my daily routine an morning exercises.

✓ Well, there are a lot of things I remember on my daily basis, especially my daily routine and morning exercises.

The word 'an' is incorrect before 'morning exercises'; it should be 'and' to connect the two items in the list.

× Moreover, I would like to include the. Homework schedules for my daily basis, which I need to remember as I could be punished it for it on the following day.

✓ Moreover, I would like to include the homework schedules in my daily routine, which I need to remember as I could be punished for it on the following day.

The phrase 'for my daily basis' is incorrect; it should be 'in my daily routine'. The sentence had a misplaced period after 'the'. Also, 'punished it for it' is incorrect; it should be 'punished for it'.

× I usually remember important things while scheduling it on mine mobile's calendar and setting alarms and even highlighting the dates on my calendar.

✓ I usually remember important things by scheduling them on my mobile's calendar, setting alarms, and even highlighting the dates on my calendar.

'Scheduling it' is incorrect because 'things' is plural, so 'them' should be used. 'Mine mobile's' is incorrect; the correct possessive pronoun is 'my'. Also, 'while scheduling' is better expressed as 'by scheduling' to indicate the method of remembering.