Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clearer and more natural, for example, avoid contractions like 'gonna' and use proper tenses. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

Example: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I practiced a lot when I was a child, which helped me with my studies.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain your example smoothly.

Example: Yes, I have forgotten important things a few times. For instance, I once forgot my dad's birthday, which was upsetting because it is very important to me.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, with fragmented sentences. Try to form complete sentences and organise your ideas logically. Use linking words to connect your points and be specific about what you need to remember.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember important dates such as rent payments, utility bills, and birthdays. To help with this, I set reminders on my phone.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but repetitive. Try to avoid repeating the same phrases and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, vary your vocabulary to sound more natural.

Example: I usually set reminders on my phone to help me remember important things, such as rent due dates and significant birthdays.

× I think I am going to be 'cause I used to do it a lot when I was a child because that helps me to study.

✓ I think I am good at it because I used to do it a lot when I was a child, and that helped me to study.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'be' without an adjective and mixes tenses. 'I am going to be' is incomplete and unclear. The phrase 'because that helps me to study' should be in past tense 'helped' to match 'used to do'. The correction clarifies the meaning and aligns tenses properly.

× This a few times.

✓ This has happened a few times.

The original sentence lacks a verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'has happened' completes the sentence and conveys the intended meaning clearly.

× I have set up many. And. Rememberings on my phone to help me going through my life.

✓ I have set up many reminders on my phone to help me get through my life.

'Rememberings' is not a correct noun; 'reminders' is appropriate. The phrase 'help me going through' is incorrect; it should be 'help me get through'. Also, unnecessary periods break the sentence improperly.

× For example I have set up the day they have to pay rent, the day I have to pay services and also because I'm not too really good at memorizing birthdays I have.

✓ For example, I have set reminders for the day I have to pay rent, the day I have to pay bills, and also, because I'm not very good at memorizing birthdays, I have reminders for those too.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'The day they have to pay rent' is ambiguous; it should be 'the day I have to pay rent'. 'Pay services' is incorrect; 'pay bills' is better. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Also I put a some birthdays which are really important to me.

✓ Also, I put some birthdays which are really important to me.

The phrase 'a some' is incorrect; only one quantifier should be used. Removing 'a' corrects the quantifier usage.