Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and use correct tense and sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating phrases like "I memorized the things."

Example: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things. For instance, I clearly remember visiting a museum with my parents when I was five years old, which left a lasting impression on me.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas logically and use past tense correctly. Also, avoid filler words and be specific about the example.

Example: Actually, I usually make lists to remember tasks, but last week I forgot to set up the auto payment for my mobile phone bill, which caused some inconvenience.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid awkward phrasing like "I don't think so I can survive for a second."

Example: There are many things I need to remember daily. For example, charging my phone is essential because I rely on it throughout the day. Additionally, I need to allocate time for work, such as reading the novel I'm currently enjoying.

Suggestion: Your answer has some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: There are several ways to remember important tasks, but I personally prefer making lists on my phone. I use a note-taking app, which is very convenient and helps me avoid forgetting anything important.

× I memorized the things that that happened a long years ago.

✓ I memorized the things that happened many years ago.

The phrase 'a long years ago' is incorrect because 'years' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. The correct expression is 'many years ago' to indicate a long time in the past.

× sometimes I forgot an important works with like last week

✓ sometimes I forgot an important work, like last week

The word 'works' is incorrect here because 'work' in this context is uncountable and should be singular. Also, a comma is needed before 'like' to separate the clauses.

× I will really remember when I forgot to do auto payment of my mobile phone bill.

✓ I really remember when I forgot to do the auto payment of my mobile phone bill.

The phrase 'I will really remember' is incorrect because the event happened in the past. The correct tense is simple past 'I really remember'. Also, 'auto payment' should be preceded by 'the' as a specific payment.

× And secondly, I had to do my work, such as reading books that actually I'm reading a novel.

✓ And secondly, I have to do my work, such as reading books; actually, I'm reading a novel.

The phrase 'I had to do my work' is past tense but the context is about daily life, so present tense 'I have to do my work' is appropriate. Also, punctuation is improved for clarity.

× There are various ways to remember our important things that we have to done.

✓ There are various ways to remember our important things that we have to do.

The phrase 'have to done' is incorrect because 'have to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the past participle. The correct form is 'have to do'.

× With this app I can never remember, never forgot to do anything.

✓ With this app, I can never forget to do anything.

The phrase 'I can never remember, never forgot' is incorrect and confusing. The intended meaning is 'I can never forget to do anything', using present tense 'forget' after modal 'can'. Also, a comma is added after 'app' for clarity.