Part 1
Examiner
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidate
Yes, I am a very good on memorize thing.
Examiner
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidate
Yes, I want time all my best friend birthday I forgot.
Examiner
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidate
I remember on my daily life, on my works and some studies.
Examiner
How do you remember important things?
Candidate
I used all my phone and all and all my work reminder. Play very good person. You know him.
Are you good at memorising things?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: Your answer should be grammatically correct and more natural. Instead of saying 'I am a very good on memorize thing', say 'Yes, I am good at memorising things.' Also, try to add a supporting detail to make your answer more complete.
Example: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I often use techniques like repetition and association to remember important information.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Score: 30.0Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. You should directly answer the question and provide a specific example. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.
Example: Yes, I have forgotten something important. For example, I once forgot my best friend's birthday because I was very busy with work.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Score: 35.0Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and correct grammar. You should directly state what you need to remember and provide specific examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas.
Example: In my daily life, I need to remember my work tasks and study schedules to stay organised and meet deadlines.
How do you remember important things?
Score: 20.0Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question. You should clearly explain the methods you use to remember important things, using correct grammar and linking words.
Example: I use my phone's reminder app to keep track of important tasks and appointments, which helps me remember them easily.
× Yes, I am a very good on memorize thing.
✓ Yes, I am very good at memorizing things.
The phrase 'good on memorize thing' is incorrect. The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at'. Also, 'memorize' should be in the gerund form 'memorizing' to function as a noun, and 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the general sense. So, the correct sentence is 'I am very good at memorizing things.'
× Yes, I want time all my best friend birthday I forgot.
✓ Yes, one time on my best friend's birthday, I forgot.
The sentence has multiple errors. 'Want' is incorrect; it should be 'one' to indicate a single occasion. 'All my best friend birthday' is incorrect; it should be 'my best friend's birthday' with possessive form. Also, the sentence structure is confusing; adding 'on' before the occasion clarifies the time. The corrected sentence is 'Yes, one time on my best friend's birthday, I forgot.'
× I remember on my daily life, on my works and some studies.
✓ I remember things in my daily life, at my work, and in my studies.
The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used here. The correct prepositions are 'in' for 'daily life' and 'studies', and 'at' for 'work'. Also, 'works' should be singular 'work' when referring to one's job. The corrected sentence is 'I remember things in my daily life, at my work, and in my studies.'
× I used all my phone and all and all my work reminder.
✓ I use my phone and all my work reminders.
The sentence has pronoun and verb tense issues. 'Used' is past tense but the question is about habitual action, so 'use' is correct. 'All my phone' is incorrect; it should be 'my phone'. Also, 'reminder' should be plural 'reminders' to indicate multiple reminders. The corrected sentence is 'I use my phone and all my work reminders.'
× Play very good person. You know him.
✓ There is a very good player. You know him.
The original sentence lacks proper structure and clarity. 'Play very good person' is not a correct sentence. It should be 'There is a very good player' to make sense. The second sentence is fine. The corrected sentence is 'There is a very good player. You know him.'