Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to avoid redundancy and organise your ideas clearly. Use linking words to connect your sentences and make your response more natural and effective. Also, watch out for grammatical errors and awkward phrasing.

Example: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. Since childhood, I have developed the habit of memorising important information, which helps me a lot in my daily work. For example, I often memorise key points before meetings to perform better.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to be more concise and avoid minor grammatical mistakes like 'miss understood' which should be 'misunderstood'.

Example: Yes, I once forgot an important flight from Delhi to New York because I misunderstood the time on my ticket. Although it was marked as AM, I thought it was PM, which caused a big problem for me.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrases like 'Owner is in note'. Try to organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words for coherence. Also, be specific about what you remember and why.

Example: As a teacher, I need to remember my daily timetable carefully. Every morning, I review and memorise my schedule so that I can smoothly switch between classes without any confusion.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, with grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to connect ideas. Be specific about your methods and explain them clearly.

Example: To remember important things, I usually write them down in my timetable and make daily notes. Additionally, I mark important dates on my calendar and sometimes stick reminders on my fridge to ensure I don't forget them.

× I just miss understood that it was a morning flight.

✓ I just misunderstood that it was a morning flight.

The verb 'miss understood' is incorrect; the correct past tense form is 'misunderstood' as it is a single word in past tense. This is a past tense issue.

× I just miss understood that it was a morning flight.

✓ I just misunderstood that it was a morning flight.

The verb 'miss understood' should be written as one word 'misunderstood' in past tense. This is a past tense issue.

× Owner is in note.

✓ It is noted.

The sentence 'Owner is in note' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It seems the student intended to say that the information is noted or recorded. This is a present tense and sentence structure issue; correcting to 'It is noted' makes it clear and grammatically correct.

× Whenever I find something very important, I'd try to write them on my timetable and I make notes every day so that I don't forget anything which is very important and his upcoming in the month.

✓ Whenever I find something very important, I'd try to write it on my timetable and I make notes every day so that I don't forget anything which is very important and is upcoming in the month.

The pronoun 'them' is plural but refers to 'something' which is singular, so it should be 'it'. Also, 'his upcoming' is incorrect; it should be 'is upcoming'. This is a singular and plural issue and incorrect use of pronouns.