Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "I'm very good at memorizing things" and "especially that of my studies" which is awkward. Also, correct phrases like "for arrest a few days" to "for at least a few days." Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words for coherence.

Example: Yes, I am quite good at memorising, especially when it comes to my studies. For instance, if I read something several times or take notes, I tend to remember it for at least a few days.

Suggestion: Your answer conveys the message but lacks fluency and has grammatical errors. Avoid short, choppy sentences and use linking words like 'for example' or 'once' to connect ideas. Also, be careful with verb tenses and sentence structure to make your answer more natural and effective.

Example: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, a few days ago, I had a meeting with my preceptor, but I completely forgot about it. I only realised after I received an email saying I missed the meeting, which made me feel quite sad.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by making sentences more fluent and avoiding pauses or incomplete thoughts. Use linking words like 'especially' and 'therefore' to connect ideas. Also, try to be more specific about the types of tasks you need to remember.

Example: I need to remember many tasks every day, especially at work. Therefore, I set reminders or make sticky notes to ensure I don't forget anything important. Additionally, I remind myself of my tasks first thing in the morning.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but incomplete and has some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts fully and avoid repeating words. Use linking words like 'for example' properly and finish your examples clearly. This will make your answer more coherent and natural.

Example: I usually use the iPhone reminders app to remember important things. For example, I set reminders for the next day at specific times so that I can complete tasks promptly. Also, when I need to buy groceries, I make a list to ensure I don't forget anything.

× I automatically remember that thing for arrest a few days.

✓ I automatically remember that thing for at least a few days.

The phrase 'arrest a few days' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'at least a few days' to indicate duration. This is a vocabulary and phrase usage error rather than a strict grammar tense issue, but it affects clarity and correctness.

× And I also remember it by taking notes. Well, study.

✓ And I also remember it by taking notes while studying.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining the sentences and using 'while studying' clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.

× Just few days back I had meeting with my preceptor.

✓ Just a few days back I had a meeting with my preceptor.

The phrase 'Just few days back' is missing the article 'a' before 'few days'. Also, 'had meeting' requires the article 'a' before 'meeting'. Articles are necessary before singular countable nouns.

× And I totally forgot and at the end of my shift and I went. Home and then I got her e-mail that you missed the meeting and I was so sad about that.

✓ And I totally forgot. At the end of my shift, I went home and then I got her e-mail saying that I missed the meeting, and I was so sad about that.

The original sentence is run-on and fragmented. Breaking it into clearer sentences and correcting 'you missed' to 'I missed' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, I need to remember a lot of things on daily basis that I need to do a particularly at my work, so.

✓ Well, I need to remember a lot of things on a daily basis that I need to do, particularly at my work, so.

The phrase 'on daily basis' requires the article 'a' to be 'on a daily basis'. Also, 'a particularly' is incorrect; 'particularly' should not have an article before it.

× I just set up reminders or make sticky notes so that I don't forget them and when I wake up I keep in mind that I need to do that. Today.

✓ I just set up reminders or make sticky notes so that I don't forget them, and when I wake up, I keep in mind that I need to do that today.

The sentence is fragmented with 'Today.' separated. Combining it properly and adding commas improves sentence flow and clarity.

× Well, I would say that iPhone reminders app has made my life easier lately because I set reminders for the next day at particular time so that I I know that I'm that thing needs to be done as soon as possible.

✓ Well, I would say that the iPhone reminders app has made my life easier lately because I set reminders for the next day at a particular time so that I know that thing needs to be done as soon as possible.

The sentence has pronoun misuse and repetition ('I I know', 'I'm that thing'). Correcting to 'I know that thing' and adding articles improves clarity and grammar.

× For example, whenever I need to buy a grocery, I just make a list of.

✓ For example, whenever I need to buy groceries, I just make a list.

'Buy a grocery' is incorrect; 'grocery' is uncountable or pluralized as 'groceries'. Also, 'make a list of' is incomplete without specifying what the list is of. Simplifying to 'make a list' is clearer.