Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用存在较多错误，导致意思难以理解。建议简化句子结构，使用简单且准确的词汇，直接回答问题，并补充具体细节。

Example: When I was a child, I was good at memorising things like facts for school. However, now I rely more on my smartphone to remember important dates, so I don't memorize as much as before.

Suggestion: 回答内容混乱，表达不连贯，难以理解。建议先明确回答是否忘记过重要事情，然后用简单句子说明具体情况，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Example: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I once forgot to submit an experiment report on time. Now, I write reminders on paper to help me remember important tasks.

Suggestion: 回答中语法和表达不准确，信息不够清晰。建议直接说明日常需要记住的具体事项，并用简单句子补充原因或细节。

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember my tests and experiments. This is important because I have to complete them before the deadline.

Suggestion: 表达不够清楚，句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地说明记忆重要事情的方法，并举例说明。

Example: I usually use my phone to set reminders for important things. Sometimes, I also ask my friends to remind me if something is very important.

× Will I send it depends on the age when I was a child, as in Edward remember answer knowledge points greatly, but now we can maybe talk about between map because I become older, nestled arms bent on the dates on the smart phones, so I seldom or remember any difficult things.

✓ Well, it depends on the age when I was a child. For example, Edward remembered knowledge points greatly, but now we might talk about maps because I have become older. I often use my smartphone to check dates, so I seldom remember difficult things.

原句结构混乱，语序不正确，导致句意不清。需要拆分成多个句子，调整语序，使表达更清晰。建议多使用简单句，避免句子过长或结构复杂。

× as in Edward remember answer knowledge points greatly

✓ as in Edward remembered knowledge points greatly

此处描述过去的情况，动词应使用过去式。原句中动词'remember'未使用过去式，时态错误。

× I become older

✓ I have become older

表达从过去到现在的变化，应该使用现在完成时，表示状态的变化。

× nestled arms bent on the dates on the smart phones

✓ I often check the dates on smartphones

原句中'arms bent on the dates on the smart phones'表达不清且介词使用错误，应改为常用表达'check the dates on smartphones'。

× so I seldom or remember any difficult things

✓ so I seldom remember any difficult things

原句中'or'使用错误，导致句子不通顺，应删除。

× Well, to be honest I always choose some environment text, web finish on some experiments, but now or if I prepare some important process helwys truth to rent sounds on the letters which would push me remember them tightly.

✓ Well, to be honest, I used to choose some environmental texts and finish some experiments, but now if I prepare for some important process, I always write notes on letters which help me remember them well.

句子结构混乱，词汇使用错误，导致句意不明。需要调整句子结构，替换错误词汇，使表达清晰。

× I always choose some environment text, web finish on some experiments

✓ I used to choose some environmental texts and finish some experiments

描述过去习惯，动词应使用过去式。

× helwys truth to rent sounds on the letters

✓ write notes on the letters

原句词汇错误，'helwys truth to rent sounds'无意义，应改为'write notes'，符合语境。

× which would push me remember them tightly

✓ which help me remember them well

'push me remember'用法错误，应使用'help me remember'，'tightly'用词不当，改为'well'更合适。

× The first thing I need to remember is the tests in every day because we have many experiments to do on for I can't arrange them translate during the before the deadline even could spend on meds to finish them.

✓ The first thing I need to remember every day is the tests because we have many experiments to do. I can't arrange them well before the deadline, so I have to spend time to finish them.

句子结构混乱，词汇使用错误，导致句意不清。需要拆分句子，调整语序，替换错误词汇。

× to do on for I can't arrange them translate during the before the deadline

✓ to do, and I can't arrange them well before the deadline

介词使用错误，'on for'和'translate during the before'不合适，应改为'and ... before'。

× even could spend on meds to finish them

✓ so I have to spend time to finish them

'meds'用词错误，可能想表达'time'，且'could spend on'用法不当，应改为'spend time to'。

× The first point I need to remember is that so I will always choose to rise only in memory by phone or send the the important messages to my friends which leads them help me to remember some important things and our message after this important things happen.

✓ The first thing I need to remember is to always use my phone to remind myself or send important messages to my friends, which helps them help me remember important things after they happen.

句子结构混乱，重复词汇，表达不清。需要调整句子结构，去除重复，理顺表达。

× which leads them help me to remember some important things and our message after this important things happen

✓ which helps them help me remember important things after they happen

'leads them help me'用法错误，应为'helps them help me'，且'our message'与上下文不符，应删除。