Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using proper sentence structure and avoiding redundancy. Also, provide clearer reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: My favourite machine at home is the TV because it is on all day, and I can easily switch channels depending on the series or movies being shown. Moreover, I enjoy watching it with my family, which makes it more entertaining.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit confusing and lacks clarity. Make sure to directly answer the question and provide clear, specific reasons with proper linking words. Also, avoid contradictory statements and improve vocabulary usage.

Example: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and effort. For example, many mothers prefer using washing machines since they clean clothes more efficiently than hand washing.

Suggestion: Try to answer the question directly and clearly. Avoid grammatical errors and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your reasons logically and avoid redundancy.

Example: No, I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine. Instead, I prefer to search for tutorials on YouTube or Google because I find it faster and easier to understand.

Suggestion: Make your answer more complete and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons why reading instructions is important.

Example: Yes, I believe it is important to read the instructions because they help us understand how to use the machine properly, which can save time and prevent damage.

× My favorite machine at my home it is the TV because it is switch on all the day and you can change the channel depend on the series or a movie that is showing on that Channel.

✓ My favorite machine at home is the TV because it is switched on all day and you can change the channel depending on the series or movie that is showing on that channel.

The original sentence has redundant subject 'it is' and incorrect verb forms 'switch' instead of 'switched' and 'depend' instead of 'depending'. Also, 'all the day' should be 'all day'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Also I prefer using the TV because a lot of people.

✓ Also, I prefer using the TV because many people do.

The phrase 'a lot of people' is incomplete and lacks a verb. Adding 'do' completes the sentence. 'Many' is more appropriate here to quantify people in a formal context.

× That is the washing machine.

✓ The washing machine is important.

The sentence 'That is the washing machine' is unclear and does not answer the question properly. Replacing it with a clear subject and verb improves clarity and relevance.

× maybe when we are washing the dishes by using the machine, it will not come 100 clean rather than we are washing by our hands.

✓ Maybe when we wash the dishes using the machine, they do not come 100% clean compared to washing by hand.

The original sentence misuses verb forms and has awkward phrasing. 'Are washing' is changed to simple present 'wash' for habitual action. 'Come 100 clean' is corrected to 'come 100% clean'. 'Rather than we are washing by our hands' is corrected to 'compared to washing by hand' for clarity.

× But nowadays a lot of wives and mother prefer to use washing machine because it's saving their time.

✓ But nowadays, many wives and mothers prefer to use washing machines because it saves their time.

Plural forms 'wives' and 'mothers' are needed. 'Washing machine' should be plural 'washing machines' to match 'wives and mothers'. 'It's saving' is corrected to 'it saves' for proper tense and subject-verb agreement.

× Absolutely no.

✓ Absolutely not.

'Absolutely no' is incorrect in this context. The correct negative response is 'Absolutely not'.

× Until today I'm not with any instruction of any machine.

✓ Until today, I have not read any instructions for any machine.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'I'm not with any instruction' is incorrect. The correction uses present perfect tense to indicate experience up to now and proper prepositions.

× I'm entered to YouTube or Google it and find the way of turning off the machine without reading the instruction because it is wasting my times and we are preferred.

✓ I go to YouTube or Google and find a way to turn off the machine without reading the instructions because it wastes my time and we prefer that.

'I'm entered to' is incorrect; 'I go to' is correct. 'Google it' is informal; 'Google' as a verb is acceptable but better as 'Google and find'. 'Turning off' is corrected to 'to turn off' for infinitive form. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Wasting my times' corrected to 'wastes my time'. 'We are preferred' is incorrect; corrected to 'we prefer that'.

× I think yes, it is essential to read the instruction about the machine because it's help us on the way that we are use it and it is save our time.

✓ I think yes, it is essential to read the instructions about the machine because it helps us in the way we use it and saves our time.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'It's help' corrected to 'it helps' for subject-verb agreement. 'The way that we are use it' corrected to 'the way we use it'. 'It is save' corrected to 'saves'.

× So I prefer I suggest to.

✓ So I prefer to suggest that.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. Adding 'to suggest that' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.