Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且内容重复。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用连词连接细节，使表达更流畅。

Example: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time. In the past, people had to wash clothes by hand, which was tiring. Now, I just press a button, and the machine cleans my clothes efficiently.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，句子不连贯。建议使用简单明了的句子，直接表达观点，并用具体理由支持。

Example: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they reduce the amount of housework. Nowadays, people are busy, so these machines help save time and effort.

Suggestion: 回答表达较为重复且有语法错误，部分词汇使用不当。建议简洁明了地说明原因，并避免重复。

Example: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they help me use it safely and correctly, which prevents damage and ensures good results.

Suggestion: 回答不够完整，表达不清晰，存在语法错误。建议明确说明阅读说明书的重要性，并举例说明。

Example: Yes, I believe reading instructions is very important because it helps us use machines properly and get the best performance from them.

× I was definitely saying washing machine is my priority and my first choice and you know in the past people need to watch their food, their clothes by their hands and nowadays the only thing is I have to do it is just press the buttons on the machine and it will have a tidy and clean clothes.

✓ I would definitely say the washing machine is my priority and my first choice. You know, in the past people needed to wash their food and clothes by hand, but nowadays the only thing I have to do is just press the buttons on the machine and it will have tidy and clean clothes.

这里的时态错误主要是“was definitely saying”应改为“would definitely say”，表示习惯性或常态；“people need to watch”应为过去时“people needed to wash”，因为描述的是过去的情况。动词watch应为wash，且“by their hands”应改为“by hand”。此外，“it will have a tidy and clean clothes”中“clothes”是复数，前面不应加冠词“a”，且“have”用法不当，应改为“produce”或“get”。建议改为“it will have tidy and clean clothes”。

× it will have a tidy and clean clothes.

✓ it will have tidy and clean clothes.

clothes是复数名词，前面不应加不定冠词a。

× people need to watch their food, their clothes by their hands

✓ people needed to wash their food and clothes by hand

这里“by their hands”用法不正确，习惯表达是“by hand”，表示用手洗。

× This the code of this the occurrence of these machines minimize the effort we need to do in per the house.

✓ The occurrence of these machines minimizes the effort we need to do in the house.

句子中“this the code of this the occurrence”结构混乱，应简化为“The occurrence”。“minimize”主语是单数“occurrence”，动词应加s变为“minimizes”。“in per the house”表达错误，应为“in the house”。

× This the code of this the occurrence of these machines minimize the effort we need to do in per the house.

✓ The occurrence of these machines minimizes the effort we need to do in the house.

主语是单数“occurrence”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“minimizes”。

× in per the house

✓ in the house

“in per the house”中“per”用法错误，应去掉，正确表达是“in the house”。

× This housework in persons nowadays, with the live pace becomes more and more rapidly we need to have.

✓ Nowadays, with the fast pace of life, we need to do housework ourselves more and more quickly.

原句结构混乱，“housework in persons”表达不清，应改为“we need to do housework ourselves”。“live pace”应为“life pace”或“pace of life”。“becomes more and more rapidly”时态和副词用法错误，应改为“more and more quickly”。

× with the live pace becomes more and more rapidly

✓ with the fast pace of life becoming faster and faster

“live pace”应为“pace of life”，“becomes more and more rapidly”副词用法错误，应改为“becoming faster and faster”。

× I read the instructions before I use the machine.

✓ I read the instructions before I use the machine.

此句无明显语法错误，符合时态和语法规则。

× using a machine is artificial and they are not intelligent.

✓ using a machine is artificial and machines are not intelligent.

“they”指代不明，应明确指代“machines”。

× So we have to follow the instrument to avoid unnecessary herd harm and to achieve a better result and to.

✓ So we have to follow the instructions to avoid unnecessary harm and to achieve a better result.

“instrument”应为“instructions”，且“herd harm”应为“harm”。句尾“and to”不完整，应删除。

× I think it's really a vital thing to read the instructions because it can help us to bring the superiority of the machines into food use and instruction often help us.

✓ I think it's really vital to read the instructions because it can help us make better use of the machines, and instructions often help us.

“bring the superiority of the machines into food use”表达不清，应改为“make better use of the machines”。“instruction”应为复数“instructions”。