Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details about why you like the washing machine. For example, mention how it helps you in daily chores or saves time effectively.

Example: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me clean clothes quickly and efficiently, saving me a lot of time for other activities.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like 'hacker tech schedule'. Use clearer vocabulary and linking words to explain your point logically. Provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Example: Yes, I believe washing and sweeping machines are essential because they save time for busy people, allowing them to focus on work or family instead of household chores.

Suggestion: Avoid repeating the same phrase and try to explain why reading instructions is important. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons.

Example: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it safely and avoid any damage.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and improve sentence clarity. Explain the consequences of not reading instructions with specific examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: Yes, reading instructions is important because if people ignore them, they might misuse the machine, which can cause accidents or damage.

× In my home, my favorite, my favorite machine is washing machine.

✓ In my home, my favorite machine is the washing machine.

The noun 'washing machine' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific machine known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before singular countable nouns is incorrect in this context.

× It is very beautiful machine and it saves me a lot of time.

✓ It is a very beautiful machine and it saves me a lot of time.

When describing a singular countable noun with an adjective, the indefinite article 'a' is necessary before the adjective. Here, 'a' is missing before 'very beautiful machine'.

× ...people are very busy in their in their work due to hacker tech schedule.

✓ ...people are very busy with their work due to hectic tech schedules.

The correct preposition to express being occupied is 'busy with' not 'busy in'. Also, 'hacker tech schedule' seems to be a mishearing or typo; 'hectic tech schedules' fits better to convey busy schedules related to technology.

× So washing machines and sweeping machines save a lot of time and helps the individuals.

✓ So washing machines and sweeping machines save a lot of time and help individuals.

The subject is plural ('washing machines and sweeping machines'), so the verb should be plural 'help' instead of 'helps'. Also, 'the individuals' is unnecessarily definite; 'individuals' is better here.

× Yes, I read the instructions before using a machine because it is very important thing to read the instructions.

✓ Yes, I read the instructions before using a machine because it is a very important thing to read the instructions.

The phrase 'very important thing' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it when used in this context.

× Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because it is very important thing to read the instructions.

✓ Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because it is a very important thing to read the instructions.

Same as above, the phrase 'very important thing' needs the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× If individuals don't read the instructions, it is very harmful for individuals.

✓ If individuals don't read the instructions, it is very harmful for them.

Repeating 'individuals' is redundant and awkward. Using the pronoun 'them' is appropriate here to avoid repetition and improve sentence flow.