Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时语言不够自然，有重复词汇，且句子结构不够清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Example: My favourite machine at home is my PS5. It is a gaming console with a large LED screen. Whenever I play games on it, I feel very excited, as if I am in a virtual world.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词连接观点和理由，句子结构更完整，表达更自然。

Example: I think the importance of washing and sweeping machines depends on the family size. For large families, these machines are essential because they reduce housework. However, for people living alone or with a partner, they might not be as necessary.

Suggestion: 回答较为口语化且重复，缺少连贯性。建议简化表达，避免重复，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Example: No, I usually don't read instructions because I like to try new things by myself. If it works, I feel happy; if not, I try again. Although I know this habit is not always good.

Suggestion: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议用更连贯的句子描述经历，并避免重复。

Example: Yes, I think it is important to read instructions. For example, once I broke my mother's new hair dryer because I didn't read the manual and used it incorrectly, which caused damage and repair costs.

× it can help you doing less housework

✓ it can help you do less housework

动词help后面应接动词原形，而不是动名词doing。这里应使用do。

× based on on the sides of family

✓ based on the size of the family

短语中应为size（大小）而非sides（边），且应加定冠词the。

× a lot of family relatives or family members

✓ a lot of family relatives or family members

此处无明显单复数错误，保持原句。

× if you just live in a studio with your with your girlfriend or boyfriend

✓ if you just live in a studio with your girlfriend or boyfriend

重复使用with是多余的，应去掉一个。

× I like to doing things by myself

✓ I like doing things by myself

like后接动名词doing，不需要to。

× I just try by myself, tap this one, tap this one, then tap this one

✓ I just try by myself, tap this one, tap that one, then tap another one

重复使用this one不自然，应使用this one, that one, another one等区分。

× I just try by myself then then I hear the sound of bang

✓ I just try by myself then I heard a bang sound

hear的过去式是heard，且表达声音时用a bang sound更自然。

× I just try by myself then then I hear the sound of bang

✓ I just tried by myself then I heard a bang sound

描述过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去式tried和heard。

× it's it was broken

✓ it was broken

重复使用it是不必要的，应去掉。

× my mother paid another price to fix it

✓ my mother paid another price to have it fixed

fix是使役动词，需用被动形式have it fixed。