Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'coffee' and improve sentence structure for better flow. Also, correct minor grammar errors like 'if even if' and 'gives off hot water' to 'it gives hot water.'

Example: My favorite machine at home is my coffee maker because it's fast, reliable, and convenient. It brews coffee in just two to three minutes, and it also provides hot water whenever I need it.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but lacks coherence and completeness. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, be careful with grammar, such as 'I have still an infant baby' which should be 'I still have an infant baby.'

Example: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in my daily life, especially as a busy mom. Since I still have an infant baby, I don't have much time to wash clothes or sweep the floor by hand, so these machines help me save time and effort.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but somewhat repetitive and contains minor errors like 'know know.' Try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and avoid redundancy. Also, clarify phrases like 'different particulars or options' with more natural expressions.

Example: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because each one has different features and settings. This helps me avoid potential problems and ensures I know how to operate it properly.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Use plural 'instructions' and avoid awkward phrases like 'navigate everything.' Also, use linking words to improve flow.

Example: Yes, reading the instructions is very important when using a machine because it helps prevent mistakes and ensures you operate it correctly.

× Whenever I needed a coffee, it made coffee in just two to three minutes.

✓ Whenever I need a coffee, it makes coffee in just two to three minutes.

The sentence describes a habitual action, so the present tense should be used instead of the past tense to indicate regular occurrence.

× Or if even if I just need the hot water, gives off hot water.

✓ Or even if I just need hot water, it gives off hot water.

The subject 'I' does not match the verb 'gives'; the sentence lacks a subject for the verb 'gives'. Adding 'it' as the subject corrects the agreement and clarifies the meaning.

× I have still an infant baby and I don't have a lot of time to wash the clothes by hands or sweep the floor by hands so.

✓ I still have an infant baby and I don't have a lot of time to wash the clothes by hand or sweep the floor by hand, so.

The phrase 'by hands' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'by hand' when referring to doing something manually.

× I definitely read instructions before using a machine because each machine has different particulars or options, so it's best to read first so there will be no future problems that might occur and you definitely know know how.

✓ I definitely read the instructions before using a machine because each machine has different particulars or options, so it's best to read them first so there will be no future problems that might occur and you definitely know how.

The noun 'instructions' is countable and specific here, so it requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'know know' is a repetition error; removing the duplicate improves clarity.

× Yes, reading instruction is very critical when you are using a machine because it prevents potential problems if you are using the machine wrongly and instructions really help you to navigate everything.

✓ Yes, reading instructions is very critical when you are using a machine because it prevents potential problems if you are using the machine wrongly and instructions really help you to navigate everything.

The word 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple guidelines or steps.