Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但句子结构较简单，且有些表达不够自然，例如“buy some ice to store them”可以更地道。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并增加一些细节使回答更丰富。

Example: My favourite machine at home is the refrigerator because it keeps my ice cream and drinks cold, so I don't have to buy ice separately. It really helps me enjoy fresh and chilled food anytime.

Suggestion: 回答中表达了观点，但用词和句子结构不够自然，如“develop our cleaning efficiency”不太贴切。建议使用更准确的词汇，并注意语法和连贯性。

Example: Yes, washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important because they save us a lot of time and effort. This allows us to focus on other activities, like playing computer games or watching videos online.

Suggestion: 回答较长且有重复，表达不够简洁自然。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更地道的表达。

Example: I rarely read the instructions because most machines are user-friendly. Also, since I don't have much time for housework, I prefer to figure things out myself.

Suggestion: 回答中观点明确，但句子结构有些重复且不够流畅。建议合并句子，使用更自然的表达，并注意语法。

Example: Yes, I think reading instructions is important, especially for new machines. However, many modern devices are user-friendly and have touch screens, so sometimes we can operate them without reading the manual.

× we can do other things like playing with our computer games and watch the TikTok instead of doing the housework.

✓ we can do other things like playing computer games and watching TikTok instead of doing the housework.

动词后面接动名词时，应该保持形式一致。这里like后面列举的动作应统一用动名词形式playing和watching。

× I seldom have time doing housework so I seldom read them.

✓ I seldom have time to do housework so I seldom read them.

动词have time后面应接不定式to do，而不是doing形式。

× we can use the machines by touch the screen on them.

✓ we can use the machines by touching the screen on them.

介词by后面应接动名词形式，故touch应改为touching。