Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，如“scoring my phone”应为“using my phone”，且表达不够简洁。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免重复和语法错误。

Example: My favourite machine at home is definitely my phone. I spend a lot of time using it to watch videos, scroll through short films, and read novels.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“keep keep clean”和“do this homework”不准确。建议使用更准确的表达，并且增加连接词使句子更连贯。

Example: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important nowadays because people are busy with other tasks. Therefore, these machines help save time and make cleaning easier.

Suggestion: 回答不连贯，有重复和不完整的句子。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，并且表达更清晰。

Example: No, I usually don't read the instructions because machines nowadays are designed to be very simple. You just need to press a button, and they start working.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误，如“needn't to read”应为“don't need to read”，且表达不够连贯。建议使用正确语法并增加连接词使表达更流畅。

Example: No, I don't think it's important to read the instructions because machines are very user-friendly nowadays. If they were complicated, people probably wouldn't buy them.

× I spent a lot of time scoring my phone just to watch some videos and scrolling the shots, short films and I also read some novels in its.

✓ I spent a lot of time using my phone just to watch some videos and scroll through the shots, short films, and I also read some novels on it.

这里'scoring'应为'using'，且'scrolling'应改为动词原形'scroll'，因为前面是并列动词结构。'in its'应为'on it'，表示在手机上阅读。复数和单数的使用需要注意，'shots'和'short films'为复数，保持一致。

× I spent a lot of time scoring my phone just to watch some videos and scrolling the shots, short films and I also read some novels in its.

✓ I spent a lot of time using my phone just to watch some videos and scroll through the shots, short films, and I also read some novels on it.

'in its'中的'its'用法错误，应该用宾格代词'on it'表示在手机上。

× I spent a lot of time scoring my phone just to watch some videos and scrolling the shots, short films and I also read some novels in its.

✓ I spent a lot of time using my phone just to watch some videos and scroll through the shots, short films, and I also read some novels on it.

介词'in'用错，应该用'on'表示在设备上阅读内容。

× Yes, they are definitely important because in these days people have more other things need to do, so there's no time to keep keep clean.

✓ Yes, they are definitely important because these days people have many other things to do, so there's no time to keep clean.

'more other things'表达不正确，应改为'many other things'。'in these days'应为'these days'。

× Yes, they are definitely important because in these days people have more other things need to do, so there's no time to keep keep clean.

✓ Yes, they are definitely important because these days people have many other things to do, so there's no time to keep clean.

'in these days'应改为'these days'，表示现在的时间段。

× Yes, they are definitely important because in these days people have more other things need to do, so there's no time to keep keep clean.

✓ Yes, they are definitely important because these days people have many other things to do, so there's no time to keep clean.

'people have more other things need to do'结构不完整，缺少不定式'to do'，应改为'people have many other things to do'。

× This machine can help people do this homework and they need to worry about it.

✓ This machine can help people do this work and they don't need to worry about it.

'homework'通常指学生的作业，这里应使用'work'表示家务活。'they need to worry about it'应为' they don't need to worry about it'，表达机器帮助减少担忧。

× No, I don't because these days the machine is designed to be very simple. They are always.

✓ No, I don't because these days machines are designed to be very simple. They always are.

'the machine'单数与后文'They'复数不一致，应统一为复数'machines'。

× No, I don't because these days the machine is designed to be very simple. They are always.

✓ No, I don't because these days machines are designed to be very simple. They always are.

'They are always.'句子不完整，应补充完整表达。

× You just need to push the button button and it will work. Works very.

✓ You just need to push the button and it will work very well.

'button button'重复，应去掉一个。'Works very.'不完整，应改为'it will work very well'。

× No, not at all. In these days the machine is very user friendly, so you needn't to read the instruction.

✓ No, not at all. These days machines are very user friendly, so you don't need to read the instructions.

'needn't to'用法错误，'needn't'后直接接动词原形，无'to'。'instruction'应为复数形式'instructions'。

× No, not at all. In these days the machine is very user friendly, so you needn't to read the instruction.

✓ No, not at all. These days machines are very user friendly, so you don't need to read the instructions.

'the machine'单数与上下文不符，应改为复数'machines'。

× You can use this machine. If the machine is not very simple there people will not buy them.

✓ You can use this machine. If the machine is not very simple, people will not buy it.

'there people'应为'people'，'them'指代单数'machine'错误，应为'it'。