Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct vocabulary (e.g., "dishes and forks" instead of "dish dishes and folks") and avoid repeating words. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words for coherence.

Example: My favourite machine at home is the dishwasher. It is very useful, especially when we have big family dinners because there are many dishes and forks to wash. Therefore, having a dishwasher saves a lot of time and ensures everything is cleaned effectively.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases (e.g., "life path was so quick", "say our lifesaver"). Use correct terms like "washing machine and sweeping machine are important" and explain clearly with linking words. Avoid vague expressions and improve sentence structure.

Example: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in our daily lives. Because life is very fast-paced nowadays, we often do not have enough time to do household chores. Therefore, these machines act as lifesavers by saving time and cleaning the house efficiently.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains errors (e.g., "instruction of fur firstly", "made me feel a little bit busy"). Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: To be honest, I don't like reading the instructions at first because they are usually in small booklets with tiny print, which makes me feel a bit impatient. Instead, I prefer to search online and see what others have done.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using plural forms correctly ("instructions") and clearer linking words. Also, avoid short, incomplete sentences and provide a more complete explanation.

Example: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions, whether in the booklet or online, because it helps prevent safety issues such as electric shocks or accidentally damaging the machine. Therefore, learning how to operate the machine properly is essential.

× My favorite machine in my home is dishwasher.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is the dishwasher.

In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. 'Dishwasher' is a singular countable noun, so it needs the definite article 'the' here to specify the particular machine in the home.

× Whenever we have big family dinner together there will be a lot of dish dishes and folks knives to wash.

✓ Whenever we have a big family dinner together, there will be a lot of dishes, forks, and knives to wash.

The words 'dish', 'folks', and 'knives' are incorrectly used. 'Dish' should be plural 'dishes'; 'folks' is incorrect for cutlery, the correct word is 'forks'; 'knives' is correct but was combined incorrectly. Also, 'big family dinner' needs an article 'a'.

× So it will be really a savior to have the dish machine so effective and and clean.

✓ So it will really be a savior to have the dishwasher so effective and clean.

The adverb 'really' should come before the verb 'be'. Also, 'dish machine' is better as 'dishwasher'. The phrase 'so effective and and clean' is awkward; 'and and' is a typo and 'clean' is an adjective correctly used here.

× Yes, of course washing machine and sweating machine is important in our daily life because in our modern society the life path was so quick.

✓ Yes, of course washing machines and sweeping machines are important in our daily life because in our modern society life moves so quickly.

'Washing machine' and 'sweating machine' should be plural 'washing machines' and 'sweeping machines'. Also, 'sweating machine' is a wrong word; it should be 'sweeping machine'. The verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject. 'Life path was so quick' is awkward; better to say 'life moves so quickly'.

× We don't really have time to do chores and say our lifesaver because they save our time and do the house cleaning efficiently.

✓ We don't really have time to do chores and say they are our lifesavers because they save us time and do the house cleaning efficiently.

'Say our lifesaver' is unclear; it should be 'say they are our lifesavers'. 'They save our time' is better as 'they save us time'. 'Lifesaver' should be plural 'lifesavers' to match 'they'.

× To be honest I don't really love to read the instruction of fur firstly because they are usually right on the tiny booklets and with tiny print, so it made me feel a little bit busy.

✓ To be honest, I don't really love to read the instructions at first because they are usually in tiny booklets with tiny print, so it makes me feel a little bit busy.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Of fur firstly' is incorrect; it should be 'at first'. 'Right on the tiny booklets' is incorrect preposition use; 'in tiny booklets' is correct. 'It made me feel' should be 'it makes me feel' to keep present tense consistent.

× I just surf it online and check what others done.

✓ I just surf online and check what others have done.

'Surf it online' is incorrect; 'surf online' is correct. 'Others done' is missing the auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense: 'others have done'.

× Yes, I think it's important to read the instruction no matter through the booklet or check it online because it will prevent some safety concerns like electric leak or accidentally damaging the machine you bought.

✓ Yes, I think it's important to read the instructions, whether through the booklet or by checking online, because it will prevent some safety concerns like electric leaks or accidentally damaging the machine you bought.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'No matter through the booklet or check it online' is awkward; better to say 'whether through the booklet or by checking online'. 'Electric leak' should be plural 'electric leaks'.

× So just learn how to operate.

✓ So, just learn how to operate it.

The sentence is incomplete without an object. Adding 'it' clarifies what to operate, making the sentence complete and clear.