Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "hours and hours" and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: My favourite machine at home is the sewing machine because I enjoy spending time designing clothes with it. It allows me to personalize my wardrobe creatively.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words. Avoid filler words like "uh" and try to combine ideas for better flow.

Example: Yes, I believe washing and sweeping machines are essential because they save time and effort, making household chores much easier and more efficient.

Suggestion: Your response is relevant but could be more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid awkward phrasing such as "instructions that how to use it."

Example: Usually, I don't read instructions if the machine seems easy to use. However, for new devices like my first microwave, I make sure to read the manual carefully to understand how to operate it safely.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words and provide specific examples to support your opinion.

Example: Yes, I think reading instructions is important because they inform us about potential risks and proper usage. For example, microwave manuals often warn against using metal containers to prevent accidents.

× but sewing machine is my one of the favorite ones because I like to spend hours and hours working on it.

✓ but the sewing machine is one of my favorite ones because I like to spend hours and hours working on it.

The phrase 'my one of the favorite ones' is incorrect because 'one of the' should be followed by a plural noun, and the possessive 'my' should come after 'one of the'. Also, 'sewing machine' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific machine.

× I assume my favorite designs on my clothes with that machine.

✓ I create my favorite designs on my clothes with that machine.

The verb 'assume' is incorrectly used here; the correct verb is 'create' to express making designs. The preposition 'on' is correct, but the verb choice was wrong, leading to confusion.

× these machines play major role in everybody's life because it saves our time, uh, it saves our hard work and it also helps us to do work in an easy way.

✓ these machines play a major role in everybody's life because they save our time, uh, they save our hard work and they also help us to do work in an easy way.

The phrase 'play major role' is missing the article 'a'. Also, 'it saves' should be 'they save' to agree with the plural subject 'these machines'. Similarly, 'it also helps' should be 'they also help'.

× Honestly, most of the times I'm not reading the instructions if a machine is easy to use.

✓ Honestly, most of the time I don't read the instructions if a machine is easy to use.

The phrase 'most of the times' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'most of the time'. Also, 'I'm not reading' is present continuous, but the habitual action requires simple present 'I don't read'.

× Like when I got my first microwave at our home, I read all the instructions that how to use it.

✓ Like when I got my first microwave at our home, I read all the instructions on how to use it.

The phrase 'that how to use it' is incorrect; it should be 'on how to use it' to correctly link the instructions with their purpose.

× I think that instructions are given for the major reason.

✓ I think that instructions are given for a major reason.

The phrase 'the major reason' is incorrect here because it implies a specific known reason; 'a major reason' is more appropriate to indicate one of possibly several reasons.

× Like in microwave we instructions are given that we are not.

✓ Like in microwaves, instructions are given about what we should not do.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It needs restructuring to convey that microwaves come with instructions about prohibitions or warnings.