Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách sử dụng số nhiều/số ít cho phù hợp (ví dụ: "machine" thay vì "machines" khi chỉ một máy). Ngoài ra, bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy cố gắng nói rõ ràng và ngắn gọn hơn, đồng thời bổ sung thêm chi tiết cụ thể về máy đó.

Example: My favourite machine at home is the mixer because I love baking cakes. I use it almost every day to prepare delicious cakes for my family and sometimes for my friends' birthdays.

Suggestion: Bạn cần chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: "washing machines" thay vì "watching machines"), và tránh lỗi sai về từ loại. Sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm ví dụ cụ thể, rõ ràng hơn về lợi ích của các máy này.

Example: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important. For instance, washing machines make it easier to clean clothes, shoes, and even soft toys. Moreover, sweeping machines help keep our floors clean, which is beneficial for our health.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một câu mở rộng để giải thích lý do tại sao bạn thích xem video hơn đọc hướng dẫn.

Example: Actually, I usually prefer not to read the instructions because they often contain too many words and can be confusing. Instead, I like to watch video tutorials on the Internet, which show me clearly how to use the machine step by step. This way, I can understand better and learn faster.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể bổ sung thêm lý do cụ thể vì sao việc đọc hướng dẫn lại quan trọng.

Example: Definitely yes. Although instructions can be long and sometimes confusing, I think it is important to read them before using a machine. This helps you understand how to use it properly and avoid making mistakes.

× I would say my favorite machines at home is the Wheeler because I really enjoy cooking especially baking cakes.

✓ I would say my favorite machine at home is the Wheeler because I really enjoy cooking especially baking cakes.

The subject 'machines' is plural but the verb 'is' is singular, causing a subject-verb agreement error. Also, 'favorite machines' should be singular 'favorite machine' to match the singular verb 'is'.

× I use it almost everyday to prepare delicious cake for my relatives and also sometime I use it to umm make a cake to my friends on the birthdays.

✓ I use it almost every day to prepare delicious cakes for my relatives and also sometimes I use it to make cakes for my friends on their birthdays.

'Everyday' should be two words 'every day' when meaning each day. 'Cake' should be plural 'cakes' when referring to multiple instances. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Make a cake to my friends' should be 'make cakes for my friends' and 'on the birthdays' should be 'on their birthdays' for correct preposition and possessive pronoun usage.

× Like it's helped me a lot in my daily life.

✓ Like it has helped me a lot in my daily life.

The contraction 'it's' stands for 'it is' or 'it has'. Here, 'it has' is correct but should not be contracted as 'it's' in this context to avoid confusion.

× For example, watching machines have us more easier in washing clothes or some kinds of shoes or teddy bears and sweet sweeping machines can have her to sweep our water, which can help a lot to our health.

✓ For example, washing machines make it easier for us to wash clothes or some kinds of shoes or teddy bears, and sweeping machines can help us to sweep water, which can help a lot with our health.

'Watching machines' should be 'washing machines'. 'Have us more easier' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'make it easier for us'. 'Sweet sweeping machines' is likely a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'sweeping machines'. 'Have her to sweep our water' is incorrect; corrected to 'help us to sweep water'. 'Help a lot to our health' should be 'help a lot with our health'.

× I usually prefer not to read the instructions because they often contain too many words and can be confusing.

✓ I usually prefer not to read the instructions because they often contain too many words and can be confusing.

No grammatical error detected in this sentence related to prepositions or other listed grammar problems.

× Instead, I like to watch video tutorials on the Internet which show me clearly how to use the machine step by step.

✓ Instead, I like to watch video tutorials on the Internet which clearly show me how to use the machine step by step.

The adverb 'clearly' should modify the verb 'show' and be placed before it for correct adverb placement.

× Although the instructions as I said before, they contain many words and sometimes is make people feel confused.

✓ Although the instructions, as I said before, contain many words and sometimes make people feel confused.

The phrase 'sometimes is make' is incorrect; 'sometimes make' is correct. Also, 'instructions' is plural, so the verb should be 'contain' not 'contains'.

× I think that you should read it before you use some machines because it can help you to know clearly how to use it and do not make a mistake.

✓ I think that you should read them before you use some machines because it can help you to clearly know how to use them and avoid making mistakes.

'It' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'instructions'. 'Know clearly' is better as 'clearly know' for adverb placement. 'Do not make a mistake' is better expressed as 'avoid making mistakes' for natural phrasing.