Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more fluent and coherent by avoiding pauses and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide clear reasons or examples. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Example: My favourite machine at home is the air fryer because it allows us to cook food using very little oil, which is healthier. For example, I can make crispy fries with just a pinch of oil, and the food tastes delicious and less greasy.

Suggestion: Focus on making your sentences complete and clear. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, try to avoid unclear phrases and explain your points with specific reasons or examples.

Example: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and effort. In today's busy life, many people find it hard to do household chores, so these machines make daily tasks easier and less stressful.

Suggestion: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid confusing phrases. Use proper sentence structure and linking words to explain your reasons. Also, be careful with grammar and vocabulary to make your answer natural and effective.

Example: Usually, I don't read the instruction manual because most people nowadays know how to use machines. Instead, I watch videos online to learn how to operate them easily.

Suggestion: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and complete sentences. Clearly explain why reading instructions is important with specific reasons or examples.

Example: Yes, I think it is important to read the instruction manual because it helps us understand the warnings and proper usage. This way, we can maintain the machines well and use them for a longer time.

× My favorite machine is. Air fryer where we can fry. Anything without any oil used. Only a pinch of spoon is required to the. If I mean we can cook a good and delicious food.

✓ My favorite machine is the air fryer, where we can fry anything without using any oil. Only a pinch of oil is required. I mean, we can cook good and delicious food.

The original sentence has fragmented and incomplete sentences, making it difficult to understand. Proper sentence structure requires complete sentences with clear subjects and verbs. Also, 'a pinch of spoon is required to the' is incorrect; it should be 'a pinch of oil is required.' Using complete sentences and correct phrases improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I believe. That washing machine is making machines are required in this busy world since most people are.

✓ Yes, I believe that washing machines and sweeping machines are required in this busy world since most people are.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes singular and plural forms ('washing machine is making machines'). The correct plural forms 'washing machines and sweeping machines' should be used to match the context of multiple machines being discussed.

× I'm having headache shuttles in their day-to-day life.

✓ People have headaches and stress in their day-to-day life.

The phrase 'I'm having headache shuttles' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Having headache' should be 'having a headache' or better 'people have headaches.' 'Shuttles' is incorrect in this context; likely the intended meaning is 'stress' or 'hassles.' The sentence needs restructuring for clarity and correctness.

× These merchants can help them and. Make that look easy under this is.

✓ These machines can help them and make their work look easy.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Merchants' is incorrect; it should be 'machines.' The sentence should be combined properly to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Basically, I don't open the manual book which is given by the company because each and every person in this generation was how to operate or as they are aware of.

✓ Basically, I don't open the manual book given by the company because everyone in this generation knows how to operate the machine or is aware of it.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has awkward phrasing ('was how to operate or as they are aware of'). Correct pronouns and clearer phrasing improve understanding.

× The machine out of breath by seeing the videos.

✓ People learn to use the machine by watching videos.

The phrase 'The machine out of breath by seeing the videos' is nonsensical. The intended meaning is that people learn to operate the machine by watching videos. The sentence needs to be restructured for clarity.

× I learned we have to. See and read the instruction manual.

✓ I have learned that we have to see and read the instruction manual.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper modal verb usage. 'Have to' is correctly used to express necessity, but the sentence needs to be complete and clear.

× Becauses either and we have to check the warnings and based on that we can maintain our machines.

✓ Because of this, we have to check the warnings, and based on that, we can maintain our machines.

The original sentence misuses conjunctions ('Becauses either and'). Correct conjunctions and sentence connectors are necessary for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Where those machines can be utilized for the long run.

✓ This way, those machines can be utilized for the long run.

The original sentence fragment 'Where those machines can be utilized for the long run' lacks a main clause and is unclear. Rephrasing it as 'This way, those machines can be utilized for the long run' completes the thought and improves clarity.