Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid sentence fragments and redundancy. Try to connect your ideas smoothly using linking words and ensure your sentences are complete.

Example: My favorite machine at home is the dishwasher because it is highly efficient and convenient. Moreover, it eliminates germs by generating heat, which removes grease residue that normal washing cannot.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but lacks coherence and contains grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid abrupt sentence fragments. Also, be careful with subject-verb agreement and sentence structure.

Example: I think washing machines are important because they save a lot of time and clean clothes thoroughly. However, I find sweeping machines less useful. For example, I bought an iRobot sweeper, but it often stalls and gets stuck, so I prefer sweeping manually.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains repetition and sentence fragments. Try to avoid repeating words and ensure your sentences are complete and logically connected using linking words.

Example: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine, especially if it's my first time. However, if I'm replacing a machine, I try to operate it first and refer to the instructions only if I encounter difficulties.

Suggestion: Your answer is on topic but has some redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use complete sentences and avoid repeating words. Also, clarify your points with specific examples or reasons.

Example: Yes, I believe it is important to read the instructions, even if you are replacing a device you already know. Instructions provide warnings and highlight potential failure points, which can help prevent problems.

× My favorite machine is the dishwasher. It is highly efficient and convenient, but above all. It eliminates germs and is able to generate heat and kill off any. Bad grease residue on the dish that normal washing would not provide.

✓ My favorite machine is the dishwasher. It is highly efficient and convenient, but above all, it eliminates germs and is able to generate heat and kill off any bad grease residue on the dish that normal washing would not remove.

The original sentences are fragmented and incomplete, causing sentence structure errors. The phrase 'but above all.' is a sentence fragment and should be connected to the following sentence. Also, 'kill off any. Bad grease residue' is split incorrectly. Combining these into complete sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think washing machine are important. Sweeping machine not so much.

✓ I think washing machines are important. Sweeping machines not so much.

The subject 'washing machine' is singular but the verb 'are' is plural, causing a subject-verb agreement error. Also, 'washing machine' and 'sweeping machine' should be plural to refer generally to these types of machines. Correcting to 'washing machines' and 'sweeping machines' aligns the subject and verb properly.

× Sweeping machine not so much.

✓ Sweeping machines are not so important.

The original sentence lacks a verb, making it a sentence fragment. Adding 'are not so important' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× However, sweeping machine I had purchased in I robot and I didn't find it very successful.

✓ However, the sweeping machine I purchased from iRobot was not very successful.

The original sentence is awkward and contains unnecessary words. 'I had purchased in I robot' is incorrect; it should be 'I purchased from iRobot.' Also, 'didn't find it very successful' is better expressed as 'was not very successful' for clarity and correctness.

× Sweeping manually is better.

✓ Sweeping manually is better.

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no changes.

× Yes, I do read the instruction before using a machine, specially if it if it is the machine I'm using for the first time.

✓ Yes, I do read the instructions before using a machine, especially if it is the machine I'm using for the first time.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple steps or guidelines. Also, 'specially' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'especially.' The repeated phrase 'if it if it' is a typographical error and should be corrected to 'if it'.

× However, if if it's a machine that I'm replacing. Then I usually start by figuring out how to operate it, and if I get stuck I will resort to the instruction as a reference.

✓ However, if it's a machine that I'm replacing, I usually start by figuring out how to operate it, and if I get stuck, I will resort to the instructions as a reference.

The original contains a sentence fragment: 'However, if if it's a machine that I'm replacing.' This should be connected to the following sentence with a comma. Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it refers to multiple guidelines. The repeated 'if if' is a typo and should be corrected.

× Yes, I do think it is very important to read through the instructions. At least skim through it even though you are you are replacing a device you are already familiar with.

✓ Yes, I do think it is very important to read through the instructions, or at least skim through them even though you are replacing a device you are already familiar with.

The pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural noun 'instructions.' Also, the phrase 'you are you are' is a repetition error and should be corrected to 'you are.' Adding 'or' before 'at least skim through them' improves sentence flow.

× Instructions can give you warnings. Any failure points?

✓ Instructions can give you warnings about any failure points.

The original second sentence 'Any failure points?' is a fragment and unclear. Combining it with the previous sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.