Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan tidak terstruktur dengan baik. Cobalah untuk memberikan kalimat topik yang jelas dan mendukungnya dengan detail spesifik. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan hindari pengulangan yang tidak perlu.

Example: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort. It helps me clean my clothes quickly and efficiently, which is very convenient.

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda terlalu singkat dan kurang terorganisir. Gunakan kalimat yang lengkap dan hubungkan ide dengan kata penghubung agar lebih koheren. Berikan alasan yang lebih spesifik mengapa mesin-mesin tersebut penting.

Example: Absolutely yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they save us time and effort. Since we have many activities, these machines help us finish household chores faster, allowing us to focus on other tasks.

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda perlu diperjelas dan dibuat lebih alami. Jelaskan alasan Anda membaca instruksi dengan kalimat yang lengkap dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuatnya lebih logis.

Example: Absolutely yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because there are many buttons and symbols. If I don't read them, I might get confused about how to operate the machine properly.

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan ada beberapa kalimat yang tidak jelas. Cobalah untuk menyusun jawaban dengan kalimat yang lengkap dan jelas, serta gunakan contoh spesifik untuk mendukung pendapat Anda.

Example: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions because the manual explains how to use the machine correctly. If I am confused, I can refer to the instruction book to avoid mistakes.

× Map of Fort machine in my home is washing machine actively.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is the washing machine.

The original sentence has incorrect singular and plural usage and unclear phrasing. 'Map of Fort machine' is unclear and likely a mishearing or mistranslation. The correct phrase is 'My favorite machine in my home is the washing machine.' This corrects singular/plural and clarifies meaning.

× Goes up.

✓ It helps a lot.

'Goes up' is a fragment and does not make sense in context. The sentence needs a subject and verb to be complete. 'It helps a lot' fits the intended meaning better.

× They like saving a lot of time of me.

✓ It saves me a lot of time.

The pronoun 'They' is incorrect because 'washing machine' is singular. Also, 'saving a lot of time of me' is incorrect phrasing. The correct sentence uses 'It' and 'saves me a lot of time.'

× Also it's can make me less effort towards my home and also was my clothes lot of thing.

✓ Also, it can help me put less effort into my housework and wash my clothes.

'It's can' is incorrect; 'can' should not be preceded by 'is'. The phrase 'make me less effort' is incorrect; 'help me put less effort' is better. 'Was my clothes lot of thing' is unclear and corrected to 'wash my clothes.'

× Because I think.

✓ Yes, I think so.

'Because I think.' is a sentence fragment and does not answer the question properly. It should be a complete sentence like 'Yes, I think so.'

× As human, we have lots of activities.

✓ As humans, we have lots of activities.

The phrase 'As human' should be plural 'As humans' to be grammatically correct.

× I think if we have a machine we can sever our time also our.

✓ I think if we have a machine, we can save our time as well.

'Sever' is a wrong word; it should be 'save.' The phrase 'also our' is incomplete and unclear. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning.

× You for to do the homework.

✓ We can use the time to do homework.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction provides a clear and grammatical sentence that fits the context.

× The machine is a lot of the.

✓ The machine has many buttons.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The correction provides a complete and meaningful sentence.

× Pushing number. Are pushing symbols if we don't read instruction?

✓ There are many buttons and symbols to press if we don't read the instructions.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect word forms. The correction uses proper nouns and verbs to clarify meaning.

× I think we gotta.

✓ I think we will get confused.

'We gotta' is informal and incomplete. The correction provides a complete and formal sentence.

× Confused what actually to do?

✓ We will be confused about what to do.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks subject and verb. The correction completes the sentence.

× Because in the instruction book order instancing card.

✓ Because the instruction book or instruction card

The phrase 'order instancing card' is unclear and likely a mishearing. Corrected to 'instruction book or instruction card' for clarity.

× It has. Uh. Thing how to do it?

✓ It has instructions on how to use it.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction provides a clear and complete sentence.

× Because if we confuse what to do, we just can see the book, the instruction, so we can use it.

✓ Because if we are confused about what to do, we can just look at the instruction book and use it.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and awkward phrasing. The correction uses proper verb forms and clearer structure.