Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but can be improved by making it more concise and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy and try to use a wider range of vocabulary relevant to the topic.

Example: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it is easy to use and helps me maintain cleanliness. Since I have sensitive skin, I prefer wearing freshly washed clothes. Moreover, it saves me a lot of time, allowing me to focus on other tasks.

Suggestion: Try to avoid repeating similar ideas and improve coherence by using linking words. Also, be more specific about how these machines help in daily life to enrich your answer.

Example: Yes, I believe washing and sweeping machines are essential because they are user-friendly and save a significant amount of time. Consequently, they help me manage my daily chores more efficiently and keep my home clean with less effort.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be enhanced by adding linking words and more specific reasons to make it more natural and effective.

Example: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they explain how to operate it correctly. This not only saves time but also prevents any potential damage or accidents.

Suggestion: Focus on improving sentence structure and coherence by using linking words. Also, avoid grammatical errors and be more specific in your explanation.

Example: Yes, I believe reading instructions is crucial because it teaches you how to use the machine safely and efficiently. As a result, you can save time and feel confident while operating it.

× My favorite machine is washing machine at home because it is very easy to operate and I love cleanliness and my skin is sensitive so I wear freshly washed clothes.

✓ My favorite machine is the washing machine at home because it is very easy to operate and I love cleanliness and my skin is sensitive so I wear freshly washed clothes.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'washing machine' because it refers to a specific machine in the home. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article or determiner.

× Yes, in my opinion washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they are user friendly and it is easy to operate and it saves a lot of time for you and you can manage.

✓ Yes, in my opinion washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they are user friendly and they are easy to operate and they save a lot of time for you and you can manage.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'it' and 'saves' referring to plural subjects 'washing machines and sweeping machines'. The pronouns and verbs should agree in number with the plural subject, so 'they' and 'save' are correct.

× Yes, in my opinion washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they are user friendly and it is easy to operate and it saves a lot of time for you and you can manage. Everything in your day.

✓ Yes, in my opinion washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they are user friendly, easy to operate, and save a lot of time for you, so you can manage everything in your day.

The original sentence is fragmented and has poor structure, especially with 'and you can manage. Everything in your day.' which is a sentence fragment. Combining the ideas into one coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I do read instruction before using a machine because it tells you how to operate it and it saves a lot of time for you.

✓ Yes, I do read instructions before using a machine because they tell you how to operate it and they save a lot of time for you.

The word 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple steps or guidelines. Also, pronouns should agree in number with the plural noun, so 'they' instead of 'it'.

× Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using it because it tells you how to operate it safely and it manage is your time.

✓ Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using it because they tell you how to operate it safely and they manage your time.

'Instructions' is plural, so the pronouns referring to it should be 'they' instead of 'it'. Also, 'manage is your time' is incorrect; it should be 'manage your time' without 'is'.

× And you can confidently use the think after reading the instructions.

✓ And you can confidently use the thing after reading the instructions.

The word 'think' is a typo and should be 'thing'. Also, starting a sentence with 'And' is informal but acceptable in spoken English; the main issue is the typo causing confusion.