Machine— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating your favorite machine and explaining why, using clear and correct sentences. Avoid repeating words and ensure your explanation is coherent.

Example: My favorite machine at home is my hair dryer because my hair gets messy quickly. I wash it every morning, and the hair dryer helps me dry it fast, saving me a lot of time.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'make my daily routine Moysey'. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about how these machines help you. Also, correct grammar and vocabulary will improve clarity.

Example: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save me a lot of time and energy. Since I don't enjoy doing housework, using these machines makes my daily routine more efficient and less tiring.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using correct grammar and linking words to improve coherence.

Example: I didn't usually read instructions before, but once I ignored the coffee machine manual and accidentally broke it. Since then, I have been very careful and always read the instructions before using any machine.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, ensure your sentences are grammatically correct and clear.

Example: Yes, I believe it is very important to read instructions before using a machine. After my coffee machine incident, I reflected on it and talked to a friend who is an engineer. She explained that every machine has a specific way to operate, so reading instructions helps avoid damage.

× I was saying my favorite machine in my home is my hair dryer.

✓ I would say my favorite machine in my home is my hair dryer.

The phrase 'I was saying' is incorrect here because the speaker is expressing a current opinion, not describing a past action. Using 'I would say' is more appropriate to express a current preference or opinion.

× Because as you can see that I'm not sure here and it's getting crazy very quickly.

✓ Because as you can see, my hair is not smooth here and it's getting messy very quickly.

The original sentence is unclear and uses 'I'm not sure here' which is incorrect. The speaker likely means their hair is messy or unmanageable. Also, 'crazy' is informal and 'messy' fits better. The pronoun 'it' should refer clearly to 'hair'.

× So I need to wash it everyday in the morning and using hair dryer dryer can really help me save a lot of time and he can give me a quick dry so.

✓ So I need to wash it every day in the morning, and using a hair dryer can really help me save a lot of time and give me a quick dry.

The phrase 'everyday' should be 'every day' as two words when referring to frequency. 'Using hair dryer dryer' is repetitive and missing an article; it should be 'using a hair dryer'. Also, 'he can give me' is incorrect; 'it can give me' is appropriate since 'hair dryer' is an object.

× By using them saves me a lot of time and energy since I don't really enjoying doing housework, but it's also necessary.

✓ Using them saves me a lot of time and energy since I don't really enjoy doing housework, but it's also necessary.

The phrase 'By using them saves me' is incorrect; it should be 'Using them saves me'. Also, 'I don't really enjoying' is incorrect; the verb should be in base form 'enjoy' after 'don't'.

× Using them can save a lot of it, can be more efficient and make my daily routine Moysey.

✓ Using them can save a lot of time, be more efficient, and make my daily routine easier.

The phrase 'save a lot of it' is unclear; 'save a lot of time' is correct. 'Moysey' is likely a mispronunciation or typo; 'easier' fits the context as an adjective describing the routine.

× I will say no in the past however, since last time I escaped reading the instruction before I use the coffee machine an I ended up by I ended up breaking it.

✓ I would say no in the past; however, last time I skipped reading the instructions before I used the coffee machine, and I ended up breaking it.

'I will say no in the past' is incorrect tense usage; 'I would say no in the past' fits better. 'Escaped reading' is incorrect; 'skipped reading' is appropriate. 'Before I use' should be 'before I used' to maintain past tense consistency. 'An' should be 'and'.

× So since then I be very careful and I read the every material very.

✓ So since then, I have been very careful and I read all the materials carefully.

'I be very careful' is incorrect; the present perfect 'I have been very careful' is appropriate to indicate an action continuing from past to present. 'I read the every material very' is ungrammatical; 'I read all the materials carefully' is correct.

× Yes, I think it's very important to read the instructions before you use machine.

✓ Yes, I think it's very important to read the instructions before you use a machine.

The phrase 'before you use machine' is missing an article; 'a machine' is correct.

× After my coffee machine incident I have been reflecting and I also talked one of my friend who is an engineer and she told me that every machine has a specific way to operate and I need to read them to avoid.

✓ After my coffee machine incident, I have been reflecting and I also talked to one of my friends who is an engineer. She told me that every machine has a specific way to operate and I need to read the instructions to avoid problems.

'Talked one of my friend' is missing the preposition 'to' and 'friend' should be plural 'friends'. The sentence is incomplete ending with 'to avoid'; adding 'problems' completes the thought. Also, adding punctuation improves clarity.