Patience— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，且有语法错误，如“quote myself”应为“consider myself”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法准确性。

Example: I don't consider myself a patient person because I often lose my temper and get nervous when I have to complete tasks under pressure.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“make”应为“makes”，“put”用法不当。建议简洁明了地表达原因，并使用正确的时态和词汇。

Example: Cooking makes me feel impatient because I'm not good at preparing ingredients, and I don't like spending too much time on it.

Suggestion: 回答结构混乱，表达不清晰，且有语法错误。建议先明确回答，再用连词连接具体例子，表达更连贯。

Example: It depends on the task. If it's something interesting like a long journey or a puzzle I enjoy, I can be patient. However, if the task requires a lot of effort without clear results, I get impatient.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不准确，如“album planning”可能是“urban planning”，句子不连贯。建议使用准确词汇，简洁表达工作内容和耐心需求。

Example: Yes, my job is urban planning. It requires patience because I need to communicate with different people and create detailed diagrams to guide the planning process.

Suggestion: 回答中有自相矛盾的地方，且表达不流畅。建议先明确观点，再用连贯句子支持观点。

Example: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. For example, I used to struggle to focus on my school assignments, but now I can concentrate better on my work.

× The thing that make me feel most impatient must be cooking.

✓ The thing that makes me feel most impatient must be cooking.

主语是单数形式"The thing"，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"makes"，而不是复数形式"make"。

× I'm clumsy at gathering food together and chopping them, so I don't like spend too much time on it.

✓ I'm clumsy at gathering food together and chopping it, so I don't like to spend too much time on it.

"food"是不可数名词，不能用复数代词"them"，应使用单数代词"it"。此外，动词"like"后应接不定式"to spend"。

× I can easily lose my temper by collecting different sauces and put.

✓ I can easily lose my temper by collecting different sauces and putting them together.

动词"put"应改为动名词形式"putting"，并且需要加上宾语"them"来指代"sauces"。

× It depends what thing I have to do umm, if I'm going to do something interesting such as going to a long journey or finish a puzzle which I like.

✓ It depends on what thing I have to do, umm, if I'm going to do something interesting such as going on a long journey or finishing a puzzle which I like.

"depends"后应加介词"on"，"going to a long journey"应改为"going on a long journey"，动词"finish"应改为动名词"finishing"以保持结构一致。

× I just found this umm I I can enjoy it but if something I need really for effort and I can't send income and outcome, I don't like it.

✓ I just found that umm I can enjoy it, but if something really needs effort and I can't see income and outcome, I don't like it.

"found this"应改为"found that"，"something I need really for effort"语序错误，应改为"something really needs effort"，"send"应为"see"。

× Yes, my job is an album planning.

✓ Yes, my job is album planning.

"album planning"是不可数名词短语，前面不需要冠词"an"。

× So it's kind of task always involves communicating with different people and finishing proper diagram to instruct how to finish this city planning.

✓ So it's a kind of task that always involves communicating with different people and finishing proper diagrams to instruct how to finish this city planning.

"kind of task"前应加冠词"a"，"diagram"应为复数形式"diagrams"，并且句子中缺少关系代词"that"。

× So it's so it's just a talk.

✓ So it's just a talk.

句子中重复了"so it's"，应删除重复部分。

× No, I think I'm much more patient.

✓ No, I think I'm much less patient.

根据上下文，学生想表达自己现在没有比小时候更有耐心，应该用"less patient"而不是"more patient"。

× When I was a child, especially when I was at middle school, I can, I, I used to stay.

✓ When I was a child, especially when I was in middle school, I used to stay focused.

"at middle school"应改为"in middle school"，"I can, I, I used to stay"语句不完整，应补充完整表达。

× I used to stay focused on my assignments, which I think I can't do nowadays.

✓ I used to stay focused on my assignments, which I think I can't do nowadays.

此句语法正确，无需修改。