Patience— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like "I am" and try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary to express patience.

Example: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I handle problems calmly and avoid getting frustrated quickly. I believe patience is an essential quality everyone should develop to manage challenges effectively.

Suggestion: Your answer is specific and relevant but can be improved by using linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, avoid minor grammatical errors like "at classroom discipline"; instead, say "classroom discipline."

Example: I usually feel impatient when my students repeatedly ignore my instructions over time. This is frustrating because it disrupts classroom discipline and hampers the learning process.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words like "there are there are" and use correct verb forms. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Example: I don't get frustrated easily when doing something for a long time because I understand that many tasks require consistent effort before showing results. Therefore, it's important to keep working patiently until significant progress is achieved.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar (e.g., "children's" should be "children") and using linking words to connect ideas. Also, try to avoid redundancy and use more precise vocabulary.

Example: Yes, my job as a primary school teacher requires a great deal of patience because children aged 6 to 10 often need time to understand and follow instructions. Therefore, staying patient is essential to support their learning effectively.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child because over time I have learned to respond calmly to situations that require time to understand, and to avoid reacting impulsively in ways I might later regret.

× I deal with the problems with a very calm behavior and do not get frustrated immediately.

✓ I deal with problems calmly and do not get frustrated immediately.

The phrase 'with a very calm behavior' is awkward and incorrect. Instead, use the adverb 'calmly' to describe how you deal with problems. This improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So I think it is a good point which every person must have to be patient or deal with the problems patiently.

✓ So I think it is a good quality that every person must have: to be patient or to deal with problems patiently.

The phrase 'must have to be patient' is incorrect because 'must' and 'have to' both express necessity and should not be combined. Also, 'good point' is better replaced with 'good quality' in this context. The preposition 'with' before 'the problems' is unnecessary.

× As a teacher, it can be frustrating because it affects the learning process at classroom discipline.

✓ As a teacher, it can be frustrating because it affects the learning process and classroom discipline.

The phrase 'at classroom discipline' is incorrect. The definite article 'the' is missing before 'classroom discipline' and the preposition 'at' is unnecessary. The sentence is clearer and grammatically correct without 'at'.

× Well, I do not get frustrated immediately because there are there are a number of chores which a person have to do constantly, then they show results.

✓ Well, I do not get frustrated immediately because there are a number of chores which a person has to do constantly, and then they show results.

The verb 'have' does not agree with the singular subject 'a person'. It should be 'has'. Also, the phrase 'there are there are' is a repetition and should be corrected to a single 'there are'. Adding 'and' improves sentence flow.

× Yes, obviously my job is one of those jobs which required a lot of patience because it is a teaching job.

✓ Yes, obviously my job is one of those jobs which require a lot of patience because it is a teaching job.

The relative clause refers to 'jobs' which is plural, so the verb should be 'require' not 'required'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue within the relative clause.

× I have to deal with children's, especially from 6 to 10 years old.

✓ I have to deal with children, especially those from 6 to 10 years old.

The word 'children's' is possessive and incorrect here. The correct plural noun is 'children'. Also, adding 'those' before the age range clarifies the sentence.

× Obviously my patient level has increased much from the past when I was a child, because from time being I learn how to react with things that take times to learn and to not act immediately to any action or to give such action which you regret.

✓ Obviously my patience level has increased a lot since the past when I was a child, because over time I have learned how to react to things that take time to learn and not to act immediately or take actions that you might regret.

Several errors: 'patient level' should be 'patience level'; 'much' is better replaced with 'a lot' for degree; 'from time being' is incorrect, use 'over time'; 'learn' should be 'have learned' to indicate past experience; 'react with' should be 'react to'; 'take times' should be 'take time'; 'to not act immediately to any action' is awkward, better 'not to act immediately'; 'give such action' is incorrect, better 'take actions'. These corrections improve grammar and clarity.