Patience— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundant phrases like "I believe, I think" and try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words.

Example: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because, as a researcher, patience is essential to achieve accurate results in my work.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Try to answer directly what makes you feel impatient, and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly.

Example: Honestly, I rarely feel impatient, but when I do, it is usually due to unexpected delays that affect important tasks, which can be frustrating.

Suggestion: Your answer needs clearer structure and smoother language. Avoid repetition and use linking words to contrast your feelings about different tasks.

Example: It depends on the task; when I work on research, I feel happy and confident because I enjoy it. However, if the work is something I dislike, it feels exhausting and stressful.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for coherence. Avoid repeating words and be more concise.

Example: Yes, definitely. Research requires a lot of patience because sometimes the results do not match our expectations, so we need to patiently repeat experiments to get accurate data.

Suggestion: Your answer can be clearer and more grammatically correct. Use linking words to show contrast between past and present and avoid repetition.

Example: Definitely, I have become more patient compared to my childhood. Back then, I used to get impatient when I was hungry or in uncomfortable places, but now I have learned to control my emotions better.

× Yeah, I know. I believe, I think I am a patient person as I am a researcher and it is very important to be patient to get out the best results from our research.

✓ Yeah, I know. I believe, I think I am a patient person as I am a researcher and it is very important to be patient to get the best results from our research.

The phrase 'get out the best results' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'get the best results'. The verb 'get' should be followed directly by the object 'the best results' without 'out'. This is a common error in preposition usage, but here it is considered under present tense issue as it affects the verb phrase construction.

× I believe that I am not an impatient person and I also believe that a person should not be impatient in the extreme conditions also as being a patient in that condition can cause the problems for himself and the and the people around him.

✓ I believe that I am not an impatient person and I also believe that a person should not be impatient even in extreme conditions, as being patient in that condition can cause problems for himself and the people around him.

The conjunction 'also as' is incorrectly used here. The correct conjunction to express cause is 'as' or 'because'. Also, 'in the extreme conditions also' is awkward; 'even in extreme conditions' is better. The phrase 'being a patient' should be 'being patient'. The repeated 'and the' is a typographical error. These corrections improve sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× It depends upon work to work.

✓ It depends on the work.

The phrase 'depends upon work to work' is incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'depends on the work'. 'Depends on' is the correct prepositional phrase, and 'work to work' is redundant and incorrect.

× When I am doing my research work, I am I am very happy and confident as it gives pleasure to me.

✓ When I am doing my research work, I am very happy and confident as it gives me pleasure.

The phrase 'gives pleasure to me' is awkward. The correct phrase is 'gives me pleasure'. Also, the repeated 'I am' is a typographical error. These corrections improve sentence fluency and grammatical correctness.

× When I do I am doing some work which I don't really like it give it. I feel like hectic situation for me.

✓ When I am doing some work which I don't really like, it feels like a hectic situation for me.

The original sentence has redundancy and incorrect verb forms: 'When I do I am doing' is redundant; 'it give it' is incorrect; 'I feel like hectic situation' is ungrammatical. The corrected sentence uses proper present continuous tense and corrects the object and verb agreement.

× As a researcher it is a very patient job because sometimes our observations and the values doesn't doesn't match our expectations.

✓ As a researcher, it is a very patient job because sometimes our observations and the values don't match our expectations.

The subject 'observations and the values' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. Also, the repeated 'doesn't' is a typographical error. Correct subject-verb agreement is essential for grammatical accuracy.

× And at that time it is very needful to be patient and to do the research from the same point.

✓ And at that time, it is very necessary to be patient and to continue the research from the same point.

The phrase 'very needful' is uncommon and awkward; 'very necessary' is better. Also, 'do the research from the same point' is unclear; 'continue the research from the same point' is more appropriate. These changes improve clarity and correctness.

× Definitely I improved my mental health since I since I was child.

✓ Definitely, I have improved my mental health since I was a child.

The present perfect tense 'have improved' is appropriate here because the action started in the past and continues to the present. Also, 'was child' is incorrect; it should be 'was a child'. These corrections improve tense usage and article usage.

× As a child I often more impatient when I was hungry or when I go to the places I don't like.

✓ As a child, I was often more impatient when I was hungry or when I went to places I didn't like.

The past tense 'was' should be used with 'often more impatient'. Also, 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match the past time frame. 'Don't like' should be 'didn't like' for past tense consistency. These corrections ensure proper past tense usage.

× But now I learned a lot and I am more patient person now.

✓ But now I have learned a lot and I am a more patient person now.

The present perfect tense 'have learned' is appropriate to indicate an action that has relevance to the present. Also, 'more patient person' needs the article 'a'. These corrections improve tense and article usage.