Patience— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，且句子较长且有些重复，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，同时注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

Example: Yes, I consider myself a patient person most of the time. However, when I have many tasks to handle, I sometimes get annoyed, especially if friends ask me for favors. In those moments, I find it hard to stay calm.

Suggestion: 表达中存在语法错误，如“stressful and anxiety”应为“stressed and anxious”，建议使用更准确的词汇表达情绪，并注意句子连贯性。

Example: I usually feel impatient when things don't go as planned or when I have to manage many tasks at the same time. This often makes me feel stressed and anxious, which reduces my patience.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“have two sitting”应为“have to sit”，建议注意句子结构和词汇使用，避免语法错误。

Example: I might be different from others because I enjoy tasks that take a long time. For example, as a jewelry designer, I often have to sit at my desk for hours doing waxing and polishing, which I find relaxing and therapeutic.

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议简化句子，注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

Example: Yes, definitely. As a jewelry designer, patience is very important. If you are impatient, you cannot focus on your work or sit at your desk for a long time, which is necessary for creating quality pieces.

Suggestion: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，如“say say”，“when I growing up”，建议注意语法时态和句子连贯性，避免重复。

Example: Actually, many of my friends and family say I was more patient as a child. It's quite different now because as I have grown up, especially recently, I often feel stressed and anxious about my assignments and tasks.

× Well, most of the time I think I am a patient person, but sometimes when I have a lot of task to handle and for example a friend told me to do something, I will be totally annoying and that time I think I was so so terrible.

✓ Well, most of the time I think I am a patient person, but sometimes when I have a lot of tasks to handle and, for example, a friend told me to do something, I will be totally annoyed and at that time I think I was so so terrible.

这里“a lot of task”中的“task”应为复数形式“tasks”，因为“a lot of”后面通常接复数名词。

× I will be totally annoying and that time I think I was so so terrible.

✓ I will be totally annoyed and at that time I think I was so so terrible.

“annoying”是形容词，表示“令人烦恼的”，而这里应表达“我感到烦恼”，应使用过去分词“annoyed”作为形容词。

× and that time I think I was so so terrible.

✓ and at that time I think I was so so terrible.

缺少介词“at”来表示特定时间点，应使用“at that time”。

× Well, I usually feel impatient when things don't go as planned or I have to handle a lot of things in the meantime.

✓ Well, I usually feel impatient when things don't go as planned or I have to handle a lot of things in the meantime.

此句无明显单复数错误。

× It may easily make me feel stressful and anxiety and that time I didn't feel patience.

✓ It may easily make me feel stressed and anxious, and at that time I didn't feel patient.

“stressful”和“anxiety”用法错误，应使用形容词“stressed”和“anxious”来描述人的感受；“patience”是名词，应改为形容词“patient”。

× and that time I didn't feel patience.

✓ and at that time I didn't feel patient.

缺少介词“at”来表示特定时间点。

× Maybe I am a bit different from most people because I actually enjoy doing tasks that take a long time.

✓ Maybe I am a bit different from most people because I actually enjoy doing tasks that take a long time.

此句无明显单复数错误。

× For example, as I am jewelry designer, I have two sitting in front of the desk for a long time to do some waxing and polishing and this makes me really relaxing and a kind of therapeutic.

✓ For example, as I am a jewelry designer, I have to sit in front of the desk for a long time to do some waxing and polishing, and this makes me really relaxed and is a kind of therapy.

“jewelry designer”前缺少不定冠词“a”；“have two sitting”应为“have to sit”；“relaxing”应为“relaxed”形容感受；“a kind of therapeutic”应改为“a kind of therapy”。

× I have two sitting in front of the desk for a long time to do some waxing and polishing and this makes me really relaxing and a kind of therapeutic.

✓ I have to sit in front of the desk for a long time to do some waxing and polishing, and this makes me really relaxed and is a kind of therapy.

“have two”应为“have to”，表示必须做某事。

× and this makes me really relaxing and a kind of therapeutic.

✓ and this makes me really relaxed and is a kind of therapy.

“relaxing”是形容词，表示使人放松的；这里应表达“我感到放松”，应使用“relaxed”；“a kind of therapeutic”用法错误，应为“a kind of therapy”。

× Because you know as a jewelry designer it is an important thing that you must stay patient.

✓ Because you know, as a jewelry designer, it is important that you must stay patient.

句中“an important thing”可简化为“important”，更自然。

× And if you are impatient and you are do working, you can't sitting in front of your desk for a long time and your words something is absolutely not allowed to be.

✓ And if you are impatient and you are working, you can't sit in front of your desk for a long time, and your work on something is absolutely not allowed.

“are do working”错误，应为“are working”；“can't sitting”应为“can't sit”；“your words something is absolutely not allowed to be”表达不清，推测为“your work on something is absolutely not allowed”。

× your words something is absolutely not allowed to be.

✓ your work on something is absolutely not allowed.

“words”应为“work”，且句子结构不完整，需调整。

× Actually, a lot of my friends and my parents say say that I was more patient in my childhood.

✓ Actually, a lot of my friends and my parents say that I was more patient in my childhood.

重复“say”是口误，应去掉一个。

× But I have to say when I growing up, especially these days, I always stress.

✓ But I have to say when I am growing up, especially these days, I always feel stressed.

“when I growing up”缺少助动词，应为“when I am growing up”；“I always stress”应为“I always feel stressed”，表达感受。

× I always have a sense of stressful and anxiety on my assignment and some tasks.

✓ I always have a sense of stress and anxiety about my assignments and some tasks.

“stressful”是形容词，名词应为“stress”；“on my assignment”应为“about my assignments”；“assignment”应为复数形式“assignments”。