Patience— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a good start but needs more natural phrasing and clarity. Instead of 'I stay calm and boring,' you could say 'I stay calm and composed.' Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating 'patient person.' Try to keep your answer concise and clear.

Example: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For instance, when I face challenging or tiring situations, I remain calm and composed rather than getting frustrated.

Suggestion: Avoid asking the examiner a question back; it can be confusing. Also, focus on clear sentence structure and correct word choice, such as 'stuck' instead of 'struck' and 'lost my patience' instead of 'lost my patient.' Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time. For example, last Sunday I was stuck in a traffic jam for hours, which made me feel very exhausted and lose my patience.

Suggestion: Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid repetition. Instead of 'do something for a wrong time,' say 'do something for too long.' Also, use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons clearly.

Example: I feel bored and tired when I have to do something for too long. For example, when I study for several hours, I find it hard to concentrate because I don't feel fresh and lose my focus.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Clarify your current role and explain how patience is required. Use correct expressions like 'I am a student' and 'I do all my work patiently.' Avoid unrelated details unless they support your answer.

Example: I am currently a student, and my studies require a lot of patience. For example, I recently started cooking classes, which also need me to be patient while learning new skills.

Suggestion: Focus on clear and grammatically correct sentences. Instead of 'I crying for a long birth,' say 'I used to cry for a long time.' Also, use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons and compare past and present clearly.

Example: When I was a child, I had little patience because I used to cry for a long time whenever I wanted something. However, nowadays I am much more patient.

× Definitely I am patient person.

✓ Definitely I am a patient person.

The noun 'person' is singular and requires the indefinite article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct in English.

× I stay calm and boring.

✓ I stay calm and patient.

The adjective 'boring' describes something that causes boredom, not a feeling. The correct adjective to describe oneself in this context is 'patient'.

× Are you feeling patient?

✓ Do you feel patient?

The question is about a general state, so the simple present 'Do you feel' is appropriate rather than the present continuous 'Are you feeling'.

× When I waited for long hours, for example last Sunday, I was struck in a traffic jam that I feel very exhausted that time and I lost my patient.

✓ When I waited for long hours, for example last Sunday, I was stuck in a traffic jam and I felt very exhausted at that time and I lost my patience.

The past tense verbs 'was stuck' and 'felt' are needed to describe past events. 'Struck' is incorrect here; 'stuck' is the correct past participle for being trapped. Also, 'patience' is the correct noun, not 'patient'.

× I was struck in a traffic jam

✓ I was stuck in a traffic jam

'Stuck' is the correct past participle to describe being trapped, not 'struck'. The preposition 'in' is correct here.

× I lost my patient.

✓ I lost my patience.

'Patience' is a noun meaning the ability to wait calmly; 'patient' is an adjective or noun meaning a person receiving medical care. The correct word here is 'patience'.

× I do something for a wrong time.

✓ I do something for a long time.

'Wrong time' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is 'a long time' to indicate duration.

× I do not concentrate on my studies and I don't feel fresh and don't focus.

✓ I do not concentrate on my studies and I don't feel fresh or focused.

The phrase 'don't focus' is incorrect; the adjective 'focused' should be used to describe the state of concentration.

× Well I am scholar now.

✓ Well, I am a scholar now.

The noun 'scholar' is singular and requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× I have recently updated my seniors Canary study so now I have joined cooking classes and I do all work by patient.

✓ I have recently updated my senior's Canary study, so now I have joined cooking classes and I do all work patiently.

'Seniors' should be possessive 'senior's'. 'By patient' is incorrect; the adverb 'patiently' should be used to describe how the work is done.

× Well, when I was child I have no patience of anything because I crying for a long birth when I bought anything, but nowadays I have more.

✓ Well, when I was a child I had no patience for anything because I cried for a long time when I wanted anything, but nowadays I have more.

Past tense 'had' and 'cried' are needed to describe past events. 'A child' requires the article 'a'. 'Patience for' is the correct preposition. 'Birth' is incorrect; 'time' is appropriate here. 'Bought' is incorrect; 'wanted' fits the context better.