Patience— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，且缺少连贯性。建议简化句子，注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复和不完整的表达。

Example: I'm not a patient person. For example, when my friends are late for an appointment, I usually call them to hurry up. If they don't come quickly, I get quite frustrated.

Suggestion: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇描述感受，并且避免重复。

Example: I feel impatient when I have to stand in a long queue because the crowd makes me bored and a little uncomfortable.

Suggestion: 回答表达不流畅，句子结构混乱，缺少连贯的逻辑。建议简化句子，明确表达感受和具体例子。

Example: I feel frustrated when I have to do something for a long time. For example, finishing my driving homework takes a lot of time and makes me tired.

Suggestion: 回答内容不清晰，词汇使用不当，句子结构混乱。建议明确描述工作内容和耐心的关系，使用准确词汇。

Example: Yes, my job requires patience because I have to study driving maps carefully and write down important details, which takes a long time.

Suggestion: 回答中时态错误较多，表达不够准确。建议注意时态一致，清晰表达耐心的变化和原因。

Example: Yes, I am more patient now. When I was a child, I couldn't focus on my homework and it took me a long time to finish it. But now, I can concentrate for hours.

× I'm not a patient person, for example, when my friends were late for my appointment, I will urge her by phone and if she always don't come quickly, I will be very.

✓ I'm not a patient person. For example, when my friends are late for my appointment, I will urge them by phone, and if they don't come quickly, I will be very impatient.

这里“friends”是复数，后面却用了单数代词“her”，应改为复数代词“them”。另外，“always don't come”结构不正确，应改为“don't come quickly”。

× I'm not a patient person, for example, when my friends were late for my appointment, I will urge her by phone and if she always don't come quickly, I will be very.

✓ I'm not a patient person. For example, when my friends are late for my appointment, I urge them by phone, and if they don't come quickly, I get very impatient.

描述习惯性动作时，不能用将来时“will”，应使用一般现在时。

× When I when I stand in a long line to wait for some something, there's so many people the crowd make me feel feel a bit bored and feel a bit fragile.

✓ When I stand in a long line to wait for something, there are so many people; the crowd makes me feel a bit bored and a bit fragile.

“there's”是“there is”的缩写，后面接复数名词应使用“there are”。“people”是复数，谓语动词应用单数“makes”对应“the crowd”。

× When I when I stand in a long line to wait for some something, there's so many people the crowd make me feel feel a bit bored and feel a bit fragile.

✓ When I stand in a long line to wait for something, there are so many people; the crowd makes me feel a bit bored and a bit fragile.

“there's”是“there is”的缩写，后面接复数名词应使用“there are”。

× When I when I stand in a long line to wait for some something, there's so many people the crowd make me feel feel a bit bored and feel a bit fragile.

✓ When I stand in a long line to wait for something, there are so many people; the crowd makes me feel a bit bored and a bit fragile.

“the crowd”作为单数名词，谓语动词应使用单数形式“makes”。

× I feel frustrated when I when I know I had to do something for a long time such for example when I finish my homework, my driving, driving homework, it takes a long time and all.

✓ I feel frustrated when I know I have to do something for a long time. For example, when I finish my driving homework, it takes a long time.

描述现在或习惯性动作时，应使用现在时态“have to”，而非过去时“had to”。

× Yes, my job requires me to be patient because my job is about the driving. Driving some papers, driving some maps that need you for a long time to get the details and and dry it down on the papers.

✓ Yes, my job requires me to be patient because my job involves driving. Driving some papers and maps needs you to spend a long time getting the details and writing them down on the papers.

“Driving some papers, driving some maps”表达不清，应改为“Driving some papers and maps”。“need you”主语为单数时谓语用“needs”。

× Yes, I think I'm more passionate now because when I were a child I can't focus on my homework. I always, I always work around it take it took a long time for me to finish my homework, but now I can focus on something for hours.

✓ Yes, I think I'm more patient now because when I was a child I couldn't focus on my homework. I always avoided it; it took a long time for me to finish my homework, but now I can focus on something for hours.

“when I were a child”应为“when I was a child”，主语为第一人称单数，谓语用“was”。“can't”应改为过去时“couldn't”。“take it took”结构错误，应改为“it took”。