Patience— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'not very a patient person' nên là 'not a very patient person', 'feel worse' nên là 'feel upset' hoặc 'feel bad', 'hear all the aunt' có thể là 'hear everything' hoặc 'listen carefully', và câu cuối 'This heavy maintain good relationship and my families and friends' không rõ nghĩa và cần sửa lại. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn.

Example: I'm not a very patient person, but I try to listen carefully whenever someone is speaking because I believe it shows respect. For example, even if I feel upset, I make an effort to listen to everything before making any decisions. This helps me maintain good relationships with my family and friends.

Suggestion: Bạn có một số lỗi phát âm và từ vựng không chính xác như 'short field' nên là 'short temper', 'can't keep their call' có thể là 'can't keep their word' hoặc 'can't keep promises', và câu 'Like never hear somebody out or just like want to make sense' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I have a short temper and get angry easily, so I feel impatient when people can't keep their promises. For instance, I dislike it when someone doesn't listen to others or only wants to make their own point. This kind of behavior really frustrates me.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ như 'my heart, work and dedication will be' chưa hoàn chỉnh và có nhiều tiếng 'uh' và 'umm' gây mất tự nhiên. Bạn nên luyện tập nói trôi chảy hơn và hoàn thiện câu cuối để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

Example: It can be quite difficult for me to wait for a long time because I tend to get impatient. However, I always try to stay calm and practice self-control because I believe that good things come to those who wait. For example, when I study for my exams, I remind myself that hard work and dedication will pay off.

Suggestion: Bạn có một lỗi nghiêm trọng là dùng từ 'students are peeing' thay vì 'students are being disruptive' hoặc 'students are misbehaving'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp như 'the job required' nên là 'the job requires', 'this important qualities' nên là 'these important qualities'. Bạn nên chú ý chọn từ chính xác và ngữ pháp đúng để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn.

Example: Currently, I'm a student, but I dream of becoming a teacher in the future. I believe the job requires a lot of patience because teachers often have to stay calm and focused even when students are being disruptive. With practice, I believe I will be able to develop these important qualities.

Suggestion: Bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng như 'I like a person who have a short feels' nên là 'I was a person who had a short temper', 'improve my patient skill' nên là 'improved my patience skills', 'keep my calm' nên là 'keep calm'. Bạn nên luyện tập sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng và từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn.

Example: Definitely yes. When I was a child, I was a person who had a short temper and got angry easily. But now, I have improved my patience skills because I believe it's a way to show respect to others, and I try my best to keep calm.

× Oh, I'm not very a patient person but I try to listen carefully whenever someone is speaking because I believe that it will show respect.

✓ Oh, I'm not a very patient person but I try to listen carefully whenever someone is speaking because I believe that it will show respect.

The phrase 'not very a patient person' is incorrect because the article 'a' should come before 'very patient person'. The correct order is 'not a very patient person'. This is a common error with adjective phrases involving 'very' and articles.

× For instance, even if I feel worse, I make an effort to hear all the aunt before making any decisions.

✓ For instance, even if I feel worse, I make an effort to hear all the points before making any decisions.

The word 'aunt' is incorrect here; it seems to be a mispronunciation or typo for 'point'. Using the correct noun is essential for clarity and meaning.

× This heavy maintain good relationship and my families and friends.

✓ This helps maintain good relationships with my family and friends.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'This heavy maintain' is incorrect; it should be 'This helps maintain'. Also, 'good relationship' should be plural 'good relationships' and 'my families and friends' should be 'my family and friends' because 'family' is usually singular when referring to one's relatives collectively.

× Well I'm a person who has a short field and get angry easily, so a person who make me impatient easily is a person that can't keep their call.

✓ Well, I'm a person who has a short temper and gets angry easily, so a person who makes me impatient easily is a person that can't keep their word.

The phrase 'short field' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'short temper'. Also, subject-verb agreement errors: 'I ... get' should be 'I ... gets' is incorrect, but since 'I' is first person singular, 'get' is correct; however, the sentence structure requires 'who has a short temper and gets angry easily' (third person singular verb 'gets' for 'who'). Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular 'a person'. 'Keep their call' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'keep their word'.

× Like never hear somebody out or just like want to make sense.

✓ Like never hearing somebody out or just wanting to make sense.

The verbs 'hear' and 'want' need to be in the gerund form '-ing' after 'like' in this context to function correctly as objects of the preposition.

× I really hate a person like this.

✓ I really hate people like this.

Using 'a person like this' is grammatically correct but less natural in this context. 'People like this' is more appropriate when referring to a general type of person.

× Well, it can be quite difficult for me to wait for a long time because I tend to get impatient uh.

✓ Well, it can be quite difficult for me to wait a long time because I tend to get impatient.

The phrase 'wait for a long time' is acceptable, but 'wait a long time' is more natural and concise in this context. Also, filler words like 'uh' should be omitted in formal speech.

× For example, when I study for my exam, I remind myself that my heart, work and dedication will be.

✓ For example, when I study for my exam, I remind myself that my hard work and dedication will pay off.

The phrase 'my heart, work and dedication will be' is incomplete and incorrect. The intended phrase is likely 'my hard work and dedication will pay off'. 'Heart' is a mishearing or typo for 'hard'.

× Oh, currently I'm a student but I dream of becoming a teacher in the future and I believe the job required a lot of patience umm because teachers often have to stay calm and focused even when students are peeing.

✓ Oh, currently I'm a student but I dream of becoming a teacher in the future and I believe the job requires a lot of patience because teachers often have to stay calm and focused even when students are being disruptive.

The verb 'required' should be 'requires' to agree with the singular subject 'the job'. Also, 'peeing' is incorrect and inappropriate here; the intended word is likely 'being disruptive'.

× And I believe that with the practice I will be able to develop this important qualities in the future.

✓ And I believe that with practice I will be able to develop these important qualities in the future.

'This important qualities' is incorrect because 'qualities' is plural and should be preceded by 'these' instead of 'this'. Also, 'the practice' should be 'practice' without 'the'.

× Oh definitely yes. Back then when I was a child, I like a person who have a short feels and get angry easily.

✓ Oh definitely yes. Back then when I was a child, I was a person who had a short temper and got angry easily.

The verb tense should be past tense 'was' and 'had' to match 'when I was a child'. 'Like a person who have a short feels' is incorrect; it should be 'was a person who had a short temper'. 'Feels' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'temper'.

× But now I improve my patient skill because I think there's a way for me to show respect to the others and I try my best to keep my calm.

✓ But now I have improved my patience skills because I think there's a way for me to show respect to others and I try my best to keep calm.

'Improve' should be in present perfect 'have improved' to indicate change over time. 'Patient skill' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'patience skills'. 'The others' is incorrect; 'others' without 'the' is correct. 'Keep my calm' should be 'keep calm'.