Patience— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains several grammatical errors, which affects the naturalness and effectiveness of your response. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific supporting details using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid irrelevant or confusing information.

Example: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For example, even when people are aggressive, I try to stay calm and listen carefully. This helps me handle difficult situations more effectively.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and lacks a clear topic sentence. Try to directly state what makes you feel impatient, then explain why, using linking words to connect your ideas. Use more natural expressions and avoid fragmented sentences.

Example: I feel impatient when I have to go through interviews because they make me very nervous. This nervousness causes me to lose patience during the process.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases. To improve, give a clear topic sentence about your feelings when doing something for a long time, then provide specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid irrelevant or unclear words.

Example: I feel very exhausted and stressed when I have to do the same task for a long time. For instance, repeating the same work every day makes me impatient and tired.

Suggestion: Your answer has some good points but is affected by grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why your job requires patience, using linking words and specific details. Avoid fragmented sentences.

Example: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I work in customer service. I communicate with different clients every day, and sometimes they can be difficult, so I need to stay calm and patient.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical mistakes and some unclear phrases. To improve, use a clear topic sentence, then provide specific examples comparing your past and present patience. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. When I was young, I was quite demanding and would get angry if I didn't get what I wanted immediately. However, now I have better self-control and can handle situations calmly.

× Yes. I'm not very pleasant to listen.

✓ Yes. I'm not very pleasant to listen to.

The phrase 'pleasant to listen' is incomplete; it requires the preposition 'to' at the end to be grammatically correct. The correct phrase is 'pleasant to listen to.' This is a common structure in English where 'pleasant' is followed by 'to' plus a verb.

× I can talk with people and even they are aggressive.

✓ I can talk with people even when they are aggressive.

The original sentence lacks proper conjunction and structure. 'Even they are aggressive' is incorrect; it should be 'even when they are aggressive' to correctly connect the clauses and express the intended meaning.

× I tried to come down even.

✓ I tried to calm down even then.

The phrase 'come down' is incorrect in this context; the correct expression is 'calm down.' Also, 'even' at the end is unclear; adding 'then' clarifies the timing. The verb 'tried' is correctly in past tense.

× I sold my table to care center on something cooking with.

✓ I sold my table to a care center for something to do with cooking.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Adding the article 'a' before 'care center' is necessary. The phrase 'on something cooking with' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'for something to do with cooking' to express purpose.

× How to go through the interview and that situation?

✓ How do I go through the interview and that situation?

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a subject and auxiliary verb. To form a proper question, it should be 'How do I go through the interview and that situation?'

× I feel very impatient 'cause maybe I become very nervous doing that situation.

✓ I feel very impatient because I may become very nervous in that situation.

The modal verb 'may' is more appropriate than 'maybe' here to express possibility. Also, 'doing that situation' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in that situation.' The contraction 'cause' should be expanded to 'because' for clarity.

× I feel very exhausted when I have to do a similar thing for want to get after Nick.

✓ I feel very exhausted when I have to do a similar thing repeatedly to achieve my goal.

The phrase 'for want to get after Nick' is unclear and ungrammatical. Replacing it with 'repeatedly to achieve my goal' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'exhausted' is correctly used as an adjective here.

× Makes me feel impatient as well as it stresses me a lot.

✓ It makes me feel impatient as well as stresses me a lot.

The original sentence lacks a subject in the first clause. Adding 'It' as the subject corrects the sentence structure. Also, 'stresses me a lot' is correct.

× I don't like yellow pins. Again and again for a long time.

✓ I don't like doing the same thing again and again for a long time.

The phrase 'yellow pins' is unclear and likely incorrect. Assuming the intended meaning is repetitive tasks, rephrasing to 'doing the same thing again and again' makes the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× So maybe in this awful so I can do the same job for a longer period of time.

✓ So maybe in this way, I can do the same job for a longer period of time.

The phrase 'in this awful so' is ungrammatical and unclear. Replacing it with 'in this way' corrects the sentence and conveys the intended meaning.

× It seems most myself will promise me to vacation every time 'cause I'm working in a customer service department and after communicate with the different clients every day and.

✓ It seems I always promise myself a vacation because I work in a customer service department and communicate with different clients every day.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has awkward phrasing. 'Most myself will promise me to vacation' is incorrect; it should be 'I always promise myself a vacation.' Also, 'after communicate' is incorrect; it should be 'and communicate.' The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× To deal with that, obviously I need to be very patient.

✓ To deal with that, obviously, I need to be very patient.

The original sentence is mostly correct but missing commas for clarity. Adding commas around 'obviously' improves readability. The preposition 'with' is correctly used here.

× Yes, I do feel I'm very patient now in comparison to my childhood because when I was kid I do remember that I was very demanding and when I need something I need and I need that at the same time, otherwise I get very angry with my parents.

✓ Yes, I do feel I'm very patient now compared to my childhood because when I was a kid, I remember that I was very demanding and when I needed something, I needed it immediately; otherwise, I got very angry with my parents.

The sentence has tense inconsistencies and missing articles. 'When I was kid' should be 'when I was a kid.' The verbs 'need' should be in past tense 'needed' to match the past context. Also, 'I need that at the same time' is better expressed as 'I needed it immediately.' The sentence is corrected for tense consistency and article usage.

× But now I'm working by myself and I have control within myself.

✓ But now I'm working by myself and I have control over myself.

The phrase 'control within myself' is awkward. The correct preposition is 'over' in this context: 'control over myself.' This expresses self-control properly.

× I grew up are very.

✓ I have grown up to be very patient.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. It likely intends to express personal growth. The corrected sentence completes the thought and is grammatically correct.