Patience— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific details. Avoid redundancy and use correct vocabulary and sentence structure.

Example: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I make decisions carefully after gathering all the necessary information. Also, I don't get easily influenced by others' opinions.

Suggestion: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Try to answer directly, use linking words to connect ideas, and provide specific examples to explain your feelings.

Example: I often feel impatient when I am concentrating on important work, but someone distracts me with unnecessary interruptions. For example, if a colleague talks to me while I am focused, I get frustrated.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Use linking words to make your answer logical and easy to follow.

Example: It depends on the activity, but generally, I feel satisfied when I work on something for a long time, especially if I am focused and interested in it.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but is hard to understand due to grammar and repetition. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Example: Yes, my job as a mechanic requires a lot of patience because if I rush or make mistakes while fixing a car engine, it can cause serious damage.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples to illustrate your increased patience.

Example: Undoubtedly, I am more patient now than when I was a child. Back then, I would get disappointed easily, but now I stay calm, don't rush, and focus better, especially when managing my finances.

× Without tenant out playing very patient person 'cause I take decissions after considering many informations related to that topic.

✓ I am a very patient person because I take decisions after considering much information related to that topic.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and articles, and contains pluralization errors. 'Without tenant out playing' is unclear and likely incorrect. 'Decissions' should be 'decisions' and 'informations' is uncountable, so 'much information' is correct. The sentence should start with 'I am' to be grammatically correct.

× Without tenant out playing very patient person 'cause I take decissions after considering many informations related to that topic.

✓ I am a very patient person because I take decisions after considering much information related to that topic.

The word 'informations' is incorrect because 'information' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Use 'much information' instead of 'many informations'.

× Also I cannot get influenced easily with others.

✓ Also, I cannot be easily influenced by others.

The phrase 'get influenced' is less formal and 'with others' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'by others'. The passive form 'be influenced' is appropriate here.

× There's many times I feel impatient with them mainly because of when I am doing a work with high constancy but someone distract me with their unnecessary things and making by an accessory.

✓ There are many times I feel impatient with them, mainly because when I am doing work with high concentration, someone distracts me with their unnecessary things and makes me an accessory.

'There's' should be 'There are' because 'times' is plural. 'Doing a work' should be 'doing work' (work is uncountable). 'High constancy' is incorrect; likely meant 'high concentration'. 'Someone distract me' should be 'someone distracts me' for subject-verb agreement. 'Making by an accessory' is unclear; possibly 'makes me an accessory' or 'makes me distracted'.

× someone distract me with their unnecessary things and making by an accessory.

✓ someone distracts me with their unnecessary things and makes me an accessory.

The verb must agree with the singular subject 'someone', so 'distract' should be 'distracts' and 'making' should be 'makes'.

× Now since then life. Guess impatient.

✓ Since then, I have been impatient.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Guess impatient' is not a proper phrase. The corrected sentence clearly expresses the intended meaning using proper pronouns and verb forms.

× It is depend on that active guard while reading.

✓ It depends on that active guard while reading.

The verb 'depend' requires the third person singular form 'depends' to agree with 'It'. 'On' is the correct preposition here.

× It is depend on that active guard while reading.

✓ It depends on that active guard while reading.

The verb 'depend' must be in the third person singular form 'depends' to agree with the subject 'It'.

× I feel very satisfied while doing it for long term I feel.

✓ I feel very satisfied while doing it for a long term.

The sentence is repetitive and awkward. Adding the article 'a' before 'long term' and removing the repeated 'I feel' improves clarity and correctness.

× My job is mechanical worker, so it requires so much patient presentations because while fixing the car engine if if I get impatient and patience and.

✓ My job is as a mechanical worker, so it requires a lot of patience because while fixing the car engine, if I get impatient...

'So much patient presentations' is incorrect; 'patience' is uncountable and should be used instead of 'patient presentations'. The phrase is incomplete and repetitive; 'if if' is a typo.

× My job is mechanical worker, so it requires so much patient presentations because while fixing the car engine if if I get impatient and patience and.

✓ My job is as a mechanical worker, so it requires a lot of patience because while fixing the car engine, if I get impatient and make a mistake, it can damage the car.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding missing parts and correcting the structure makes the meaning clear.

× And do anything wrong then it hurt all the car and it is it is very.

✓ And if I do anything wrong, it can damage the whole car, and that is very serious.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correct pronoun use and sentence completion are necessary for clarity.

× Undoubtedly I am, so I have so much patience now.

✓ Undoubtedly I am, so I have much more patience now.

'So much patience' is acceptable but 'much more patience' better expresses comparison with childhood patience.

× Then in my childhood age, because at that age I am I guess disappointed very easily by others.

✓ Than in my childhood, because at that age I guess I was disappointed very easily by others.

'Then' should be 'Than' for comparison. 'I am' should be 'I was' to match past tense. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× But now I have a lot of patient that I don't hurry up and don't get distracted easily and interested in finances.

✓ But now I have a lot of patience; I don't hurry up, don't get distracted easily, and am interested in finances.

'Patient' should be 'patience' (noun). The sentence is improved by adding punctuation and correcting verb forms for parallelism.