Patience— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant but a bit repetitive and slightly long. Try to avoid repeating phrases and keep your answer concise within 4-5 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I am not a very patient person because I often feel restless when waiting for something important. To cope, I usually keep myself busy to avoid feeling anxious. Therefore, waiting can be quite stressful for me.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but some sentences are unclear and contain grammatical errors. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: I feel impatient when waiting for something important, especially if it impacts my future. For example, when I was waiting for my MBA results, I felt very nervous but tried to stay calm because I was eager to know my performance.

Suggestion: Your answer has many grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases which affect understanding. Focus on correct sentence structure and vocabulary. Also, try to organize your ideas logically using linking words.

Example: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually feel irritated and bored because it becomes monotonous. Therefore, I try to find ways to stay interested and motivated during such tasks.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and has some grammatical errors. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Example: Yes, my job definitely requires patience because I communicate with many people. For example, when dealing with difficult clients, I have to stay calm and handle the situation carefully.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains incomplete sentences. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: I don't clearly remember my childhood, but I believe I have always been impatient. I disliked waiting and preferred to get things immediately, so I was not a patient child.

× For instance, when I was waiting for my MBA whistles, I was getting really nervous and try.

✓ For instance, when I was waiting for my MBA results, I was getting really nervous and tried.

The verb 'try' should be in the past tense 'tried' to match the past continuous tense 'was getting' and maintain tense consistency in the sentence.

× I'm mostly get very and irritated and annoyed.

✓ I mostly get very irritated and annoyed.

The phrase 'I'm mostly get' is incorrect; 'I mostly get' is the correct form. 'I'm' (I am) should not be used before 'get' here because 'get' is the main verb in present simple tense.

× Ann feel bored after sometime because it gives me a monotone as feeling an I.

✓ And I feel bored after some time because it gives me a monotonous feeling.

The sentence contains misspellings and incorrect word forms: 'Ann' should be 'And', 'sometime' should be 'some time' (two words), 'monotone as feeling an I' is incorrect and should be 'monotonous feeling' to correctly describe the sensation.

× I always have to do something that makes me feel interested and get me going.

✓ I always have to do something that makes me feel interested and keeps me going.

The verb 'get' should agree with the singular subject 'something' and be in the third person singular form 'keeps' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× For instance, whenever I'm handling a difficult client, I have to make sure that I keep my calm and deal with him very.

✓ For instance, whenever I'm handling a difficult client, I have to make sure that I keep my calm and deal with him very well.

The adverb 'well' is missing after 'very' to complete the phrase 'very well', which correctly modifies the verb 'deal'.

× I tried to not.

✓ I try not to.

The phrase 'I tried to not' is incomplete and incorrect in this context. The correct form is 'I try not to' to express habitual action in present tense.

× I want to get get them instantly.

✓ I want to get them instantly.

The word 'get' is repeated unnecessarily. Removing the duplicate 'get' corrects the sentence.