Patience— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some grammatical errors and redundancies. Try to give a clear, concise response directly addressing the question, followed by a supporting detail using linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I can wait calmly for things that take time. For example, I remain composed during stressful situations and do not rush decisions.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and better structured. Avoid filler words like 'you know' and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I feel impatient during stressful situations, especially in sports events like league games. Because the matches are intense, I often get anxious and eager to see the final result.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, making it difficult to understand your point. Try to organize your thoughts clearly, use complete sentences, and provide specific supporting details with linking words.

Example: I feel positive when I have to work on something for a long time because it allows me to focus and produce better results. For instance, when working with my team, we can collaborate effectively and achieve our goals.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words to connect ideas more smoothly.

Example: Although I am currently a full-time student, my studies require a lot of patience. If I rush through tasks impatiently, I might miss important details, so working patiently helps me achieve better results.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and somewhat repetitive. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child. When I was younger, I was very impatient and curious, wanting to learn everything quickly. However, now I understand that some things take time, so I am more patient.

× I often wait for the things which takes time.

✓ I often wait for the things which take time.

The subject 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'take' instead of 'takes' to agree in number.

× And along with that being patient is not only about how much weight is about how much I mean how you behave in the particular time.

✓ And along with that, being patient is not only about how much weight it has but also about how you behave at a particular time.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper conjunctions and prepositions. Adding 'but also' clarifies the contrast, and 'at a particular time' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× And I be a very common stressful situations or a longer period of time.

✓ And I am very calm in stressful situations or for a longer period of time.

The original sentence has incorrect verb form 'be' and unclear meaning. 'I am' is correct for first person singular, and 'calm' fits the context better than 'common'. Also, 'in stressful situations' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× The things that makes me impatient are the stressful situations in our league game or sports event because it is a little bit, you know, stressful, an little bit anxious as well.

✓ The things that make me impatient are the stressful situations in our league games or sports events because they are a little bit, you know, stressful and a little bit anxious as well.

'Things' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' instead of 'makes'. Also, 'league games' and 'sports events' should be plural to match the context. 'They are' refers to plural situations.

× And we often get nervous in in an intense match.

✓ And we often get nervous during an intense match.

The preposition 'during' is more appropriate to indicate the time when nervousness occurs. Also, the repeated 'in' is a typo.

× So I am really impatient for the match to get in and see the result.

✓ So I am really impatient for the match to start and to see the result.

The phrase 'impatient for the match to get in' is incorrect. 'Impatient for the match to start' is the correct expression.

× I feel really great because the time given his really long an in that particular time we can give our best an along with that we can produce the results which.

✓ I feel really great because the time given is really long and in that particular time we can give our best and along with that we can produce the results which.

The word 'his' is a typo and should be 'is'. Also, 'an' should be 'and'. These corrections fix quantifier and article errors.

× I was I could expect or my team if I could, if I work with them and along with that I can give my best so that I can.

✓ I could expect from my team if I work with them, and along with that, I can give my best so that I can succeed.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Reordering and adding missing words improves clarity and sentence structure.

× Currently I don't do a job but I am a full time student and it does require patience because patience is the key to success.

✓ Currently, I don't have a job but I am a full-time student and it does require patience because patience is the key to success.

The phrase 'do a job' is incorrect; 'have a job' is the correct expression. Also, 'full time' should be hyphenated as 'full-time' when used as an adjective.

× An if we do things lot impatiently we might miss out the things which we need to focus on and along with that we need to work patiently so that we can get the best.

✓ And if we do things a lot impatiently, we might miss out on the things which we need to focus on and along with that we need to work patiently so that we can get the best.

The phrase 'lot impatiently' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot impatiently'. Also, 'miss out the things' should be 'miss out on the things' to use the correct preposition.

× Yes, definitely. I'm more patient than I was a child because when I was younger I was really impatient and really curious about the things and really wanted to know the things very fast.

✓ Yes, definitely. I'm more patient than I was as a child because when I was younger I was really impatient and really curious about things and really wanted to know things very fast.

The phrase 'than I was a child' should be 'than I was as a child' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'the things' is better as 'things' in this context.

× And as compared to now I tend to be more patient because everything is really time taking and along with that it gives me a.

✓ And compared to now, I tend to be more patient because everything really takes time and along with that, it gives me a.

The phrase 'as compared to now' is better as 'compared to now'. Also, 'time taking' is incorrect; 'takes time' is the correct expression.