Patience— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words. Keep your answer concise within 5 sentences and avoid redundancy.

Example: Yes, I consider myself a patient person now. When I was a child, I was quite impatient because I wanted things immediately. However, over time, I have learned to wait calmly in different situations. This change happened due to various experiences that taught me the value of patience.

Suggestion: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and directly, using linking words to connect your points logically. Provide specific reasons or examples to support your answer.

Example: I feel impatient when my expectations are not met, especially when I expect a lot from others or myself. For example, if someone delays completing a task, I tend to get frustrated. This makes me feel restless and eager for things to be done quickly.

Suggestion: Your answer covers the main idea but has grammatical errors and some unclear expressions. Try to use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, be more specific about your feelings and reasons.

Example: It depends on the task I am doing. If I am interested in the activity, I enjoy doing it for a long time. However, if I have to do something under pressure or without interest, I feel frustrated and want to stop quickly.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and clearly, using linking words to explain your points. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

Example: I am currently a student, so I do not have a job. However, my schoolwork requires patience because I have to complete many files and sit for long hours. This experience is helping me develop more patience.

Suggestion: Your answer has unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly with correct grammar and use linking words to connect your points logically. Provide specific examples or reasons to support your answer.

Example: I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child. As a child, I wanted things immediately and often got upset if I had to wait. Now, I understand that some things take time, so I try to stay focused and wait patiently for the right moment.

× I will I when I was child, I don't or I didn't have that much patient in my life as I was so very, you know, impatient.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have that much patience in my life as I was very, you know, impatient.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I will I' which is not proper past tense. The correct past tense form 'When I was a child' should be used. Also, 'patient' should be 'patience' as it is a noun here. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity and correct tense usage.

× I don't or I didn't have that much patient in my life as I was so very, you know, impatient.

✓ I didn't have that much patience in my life as I was very, you know, impatient.

The word 'patient' is an adjective, but here the noun 'patience' is required to express the quality. Using 'patience' correctly conveys the intended meaning.

× I just so obvious wish that I want things so I want but now things and change in my life.

✓ I obviously wished for things I wanted, but now things have changed in my life.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Proper sentence structure with subject-verb agreement and correct tense is necessary for clarity.

× Now I'm very patient person saying all this strong thing, all those circumstances so.

✓ Now I'm a very patient person despite all these strong things and circumstances.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'very patient person' and uses 'thing' instead of plural 'things'. Correct article usage and plural form improve grammatical accuracy.

× So they're going to some things that actually made Musulin patients like my expectation, specially because whenever I expect a lot from others or from myself also and that expectations are not, you know, met that right.

✓ There are some things that actually make me impatient, like my expectations, especially because whenever I expect a lot from others or from myself and those expectations are not met, I feel that way.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has unclear references. Correct pronouns and clearer sentence structure are needed for proper meaning.

× specially because whenever I expect a lot from others or from myself also and that expectations are not, you know, met that right.

✓ especially because whenever I expect a lot from others or from myself and those expectations are not met properly.

The word 'specially' should be 'especially' to correctly modify the clause. Also, 'that expectations' should be 'those expectations' for correct demonstrative pronoun usage.

× So I just feel impatient and the task form like you think is that that's if the tag is task.

✓ So I just feel impatient, especially when the task is difficult or challenging.

The original sentence is unclear and fragmented. It needs restructuring to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Switch it is, you know, depend on the things that I'm doing.

✓ It depends on the things that I'm doing.

The phrase 'Switch it is' is incorrect and unnecessary. The verb 'depend' should be in third person singular form 'depends' to agree with the subject 'it'.

× If I'm doing something that they will actually I'm interested in, definitely I feel good to do that.

✓ If I'm doing something that I am actually interested in, I definitely feel good doing that.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'they will' which is unnecessary and incorrect. The subject should be 'I' and verb forms should agree accordingly.

× But if I'm doing things that I have to do it though with the pressure, I don't feel like doing it for a long time.

✓ But if I'm doing things that I have to do under pressure, I don't feel like doing them for a long time.

The phrase 'do it though with the pressure' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'under pressure'. Also, pronoun agreement is corrected from 'it' to 'them' for plural 'things'.

× I just feel frustrated and I just wanted to put that work.

✓ I just feel frustrated and I just want to stop that work.

The phrase 'put that work' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'stop that work'. Also, tense consistency is maintained by using 'want' instead of 'wanted'.

× Frankly, I'm not doing any kind of job, but to my work, the school work I'm getting at requests or.

✓ Frankly, I'm not doing any kind of job, but with my school work, I'm getting many requests.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correct present tense and sentence structure improve clarity.

× Impatience because I have to make a lot of files, I have to sit for a long time and that thing I think nowadays require a lot of patience, so which I am trying my best to get.

✓ It requires a lot of patience because I have to make a lot of files and sit for a long time, so I am trying my best to develop it.

The sentence misuses pronouns and articles. 'That thing' is vague; replacing with 'It' clarifies the subject. Also, verb agreement and sentence flow are improved.

× I'm more patient now because when I was a child, I used to throw the Lord that I want to things immediately purchase circumstances now.

✓ I'm more patient now because when I was a child, I used to throw tantrums when I wanted things immediately, but circumstances have changed now.

The original sentence has incorrect phrases like 'throw the Lord' and 'purchase circumstances'. Correct idiomatic expression is 'throw tantrums'. Also, tense consistency and sentence clarity are improved.

× The way of working now has changed a lot in my life and I have to still out of focus in my life and moreover items to wait for the exact time or you know, I'll just wait for things to happen.

✓ The way I work now has changed a lot in my life, and I have to stay focused. Moreover, I have to wait for the right time, or you know, just wait for things to happen.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Proper sentence structure and word choice improve clarity and grammatical correctness.