Patience— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议简洁明了地直接回答问题，并用一两句具体细节支持观点。

Example: No, I am not a patient person because I often worry about forgetting important tasks. This anxiety makes me feel upset and impatient.

Suggestion: 回答语法混乱，表达不清晰。建议用简单句子直接说明原因，并用连接词使句子连贯。

Example: I feel impatient when I have to finish tasks before a deadline because I fear I might not complete them on time, which makes me stressed.

Suggestion: 回答内容不明确，句子结构混乱。建议直接表达感受，并说明如何应对长时间的任务。

Example: When I have to do something for a long time, I feel tired but I try to manage my time well by making a detailed schedule.

Suggestion: 回答中有词汇错误和表达不清，建议使用正确词汇并简洁说明工作中需要耐心的原因。

Example: Yes, my job requires patience because I train new employees and help them communicate effectively with clients.

Suggestion: 回答表达不流畅，语法错误较多。建议用简单句子表达成长带来的耐心变化，并给出原因。

Example: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to understand the reasons behind things that happen around me.

× No sometimes I always be worried about what what kind of things I forgot to do.

✓ No, sometimes I am always worried about what kind of things I forgot to do.

句子缺少逗号，且动词形式不正确，应使用am表示现在时态。建议在No后加逗号，并将be改为am。

× So I am very upset on their anxiety about things they have dead right.

✓ So I am very upset about their anxiety about things they have done right.

upset后应使用介词about而非on，且dead应为done，表示完成时态。

× As I mentioned on if something I need to I need to finish before the deadline, I I maybe I fear I will fear stressful and answers so that things I need to not feel fear impatient.

✓ As I mentioned, if there is something I need to finish before the deadline, I may feel stressed and anxious, so I try not to feel impatient.

句子结构混乱，重复使用词语，缺少连词和标点，需重组句子使其通顺。

× Oh I will text dates for these things and I need to plan to a fully schedule for the long time long term. Purple's SO.

✓ Oh, I will set dates for these things and I need to plan a full schedule for the long term.

text dates应为set dates，plan后不加to，fully应为full，long time long term重复且不正确。

× Yes, I'm working as a mockumentary, so I have a 10% team team for some knew in commerce newcomers.

✓ Yes, I'm working as a documentary maker, so I have a 10% team for some new commerce newcomers.

mockumentary应为documentary maker，team重复，knew应为new。

× I need to be patient with them and teach them how to communicate with our clients.

✓ I need to be patient with them and teach them how to communicate with our clients.

该句无明显语法错误，保持原句。

× Yes, by the time overtime. I grow up and. Try to recognize an everything happened in surrounding my life so I can figure out what's the underlying reasons.

✓ Yes, over time, I have grown up and tried to recognize everything happening around my life so I can figure out the underlying reasons.

grow up应使用现在完成时have grown up，try应为tried，happened应为happening，surrounding用法不当，应为around。

× So be patient then. I'm a child.

✓ So I am more patient now than when I was a child.

句子结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语，需补充完整表达比较关系。