Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of saying "I think they're salty and it doesn't suit my flavor," you can say "because I find them too salty for my taste." Also, avoid repeating "I eat snacks" twice; combine the ideas for clarity.

Example: I usually eat snacks only when others offer them or when I go to the cinema and want some popcorn, because I find most snacks too salty for my taste.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words like "uh" and "umm" to make your answer sound more confident and natural. Use correct grammar, for example, "they offer" instead of "they offers." Also, use linking words such as "however" to contrast ideas and be more specific about the healthier options.

Example: Some snacks are unhealthy because they contain high calories and salt; however, nowadays, there are healthier options available that are less salty and made with organic ingredients.

Suggestion: Improve sentence clarity and grammar by restructuring your answer. Use linking words like "because" properly and avoid repetition. For example, say "My parents avoided giving me snacks because they knew the effects, so I seldom ate them during my childhood."

Example: I seldom ate snacks when I was young because my parents avoided giving them to me, knowing their negative effects.

Suggestion: Make your answer clearer and more natural by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain your preference. For example, say "If I have to choose, I prefer potato chips because they are crispy and less salty than other brands, although they are a bit more expensive."

Example: If I have to choose, I prefer potato chips because they are crispy and less salty than other brands, although they cost a little more.

× I seldom eat snacks because I think they're salty and it doesn't suit my flavor, so I eat snacks when others offer me or when I go to cinema and I need some popcorns.

✓ I seldom eat snacks because I think they're salty and they don't suit my flavor, so I eat snacks when others offer me or when I go to the cinema and I need some popcorn.

The word 'popcorns' is incorrect because 'popcorn' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Also, 'it doesn't suit my flavor' should be 'they don't suit my flavor' to agree with the plural subject 'snacks'. Additionally, 'go to cinema' needs the definite article 'the' before 'cinema'. These corrections ensure proper singular/plural agreement and article usage.

× I think that's, uh, there are some choices that are not healthy. Umm, for example, they are made of high calories and salts, but I think now they offers much more healthier options like uh, less salty and with organic ingredients.

✓ I think that's, uh, there are some choices that are not healthy. Umm, for example, they are made of high calories and salt, but I think now they offer much healthier options like, uh, less salty and with organic ingredients.

The word 'salts' should be 'salt' because 'salt' is usually uncountable in this context. The verb 'offers' should be 'offer' to agree with the plural subject 'they'. Also, 'much more healthier' is incorrect; it should be 'much healthier' because 'healthier' is a comparative adjective and 'much' is sufficient as an intensifier. These corrections fix pluralization and subject-verb agreement errors.

× No as well because I think it's my parents avoid snacks for me because they also know their the effects of the snack so I also seldom eat snacks during my childhood.

✓ No, as well, because I think my parents avoided snacks for me because they also knew the effects of snacks, so I also seldom ate snacks during my childhood.

The sentence refers to past events, so verbs should be in the past tense: 'avoid' to 'avoided', 'know' to 'knew', and 'eat' to 'ate'. Also, 'their the effects' is incorrect; it should be 'the effects'. These changes correct tense consistency and article usage.

× If I have to choose one, I will choose less. It is a potato chips, but I think it's difference with other brands because of it's uh, it's really crispy and it's not really salty, but the price is a little bit higher than others, so.

✓ If I have to choose one, I will choose fewer. It is potato chips, but I think it's different from other brands because it's, uh, really crispy and it's not really salty, but the price is a little bit higher than others.

'Less' should be 'fewer' when referring to countable items like 'potato chips'. 'A potato chips' is incorrect because 'chips' is plural; it should be just 'potato chips'. 'Difference with' should be 'different from'. Also, 'it's' is a contraction for 'it is' and should be 'its' for possession, but here 'it's' is correct as 'it is'. These corrections fix singular/plural issues and preposition use.