Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但存在语法错误（如“tend to snacks”应为“tend to snack”），且句子较长，建议简化句子结构，避免语法错误，同时使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Example: I usually eat snacks during study or work breaks to recharge my energy. Sometimes, I feel very hungry before meals, so I have a small snack to satisfy my hunger.

Suggestion: 回答内容具体且有逻辑，但“Children's Health”中的大写错误和“insidious effects”表达稍显生硬，建议使用更自然的表达，并注意大小写规范。

Example: I don't think eating snacks is healthy because many contain high levels of sugar, salt, and unhealthy fats. This can harm people's health, especially children's growth. Eating too many snacks may also cause weight gain and other health problems.

Suggestion: 回答简洁明了，表达清晰，但“Even my parents didn't allow me”语句略显突兀，建议使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Example: Yes, I often bought snacks with my pocket money when I was young, even though my parents didn't allow it. I really enjoyed junk food, so I was quite chubby at that time.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误（如“cuisines that uses”应为“cuisines that use”），表达不够连贯，且“cheese”归类为甜食不准确。建议调整词汇使用，改进句子结构，使表达更自然。

Example: I really like sweet snacks like chocolate and desserts. Besides that, I also enjoy dishes that use sugar as a seasoning because it adds a delicious flavor.

× sometimes I tend to snacks during study and work breaks to recharge my energy

✓ sometimes I tend to snack during study and work breaks to recharge my energy

这里的动词短语'tend to'后面应该接动词原形，'snacks'是名词，应该用动词'snack'表示吃零食的动作。

× They are detrimental to people, especially to Children's Health and growth.

✓ They are detrimental to people, especially to children's health and growth.

'Children's'中的大写字母不正确，所有格名词应小写，且health和growth不应大写。

× I even like cuisines that uses sugar as a seasoning, which make dishes more umami.

✓ I even like cuisines that use sugar as a seasoning, which makes dishes more umami.

关系代词that后面的动词应与先行词cuisines（复数）保持一致，故用'use'，而which指代单数，动词用单数形式'makes'。