Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more concise and structured. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of 'make me have enough energy feel my body,' say 'help me maintain my energy throughout the day.'

Example: I usually eat snacks before and after my workout. Before exercising, I consume easily digestible carbs and protein to fuel my body. Afterward, I eat some sugary snacks to help my muscles recover quickly and maintain my energy levels throughout the day.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but could be improved by clearer sentence structure and better linking words. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'generally considered unhealthy' without explanation. Try to be more specific about why some snacks are healthy or unhealthy.

Example: I believe snacks can be healthy if you choose options high in protein and low in carbs and fat, as they help maintain body weight. However, snacks like crackers or cookies are usually less healthy but can be enjoyed occasionally in moderation without harming your health. For example, I sometimes have a small portion of Oreos as a treat.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and detailed, but you can improve coherence by using linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' more effectively. Also, watch for subject-verb agreement, e.g., 'they discouraged me' instead of 'they discourage me.'

Example: No, I didn't often eat snacks when I was young because my family believed that chemicals in packaged snacks could harm brain development. Therefore, they discouraged me from eating highly processed snacks and usually gave me fresh fruits, vegetables, or homemade crackers, which they considered healthier.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use plural forms correctly (e.g., 'crackers that are salty') and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: I prefer salty snacks like crackers because I enjoy savory flavors more than sweets. However, I also like Oreos since their semi-sweet black crackers are not too overwhelming. Overall, crackers are my favourite snacks.

× I usually eat snacks before and right after I workout.

✓ I usually eat snacks before and right after I am working out.

The verb 'workout' is used incorrectly here as a noun; the correct form is the present continuous 'am working out' to indicate the ongoing action around which the snacks are eaten.

× I will eat some quick digesting carbs and protein before my workout to support me throughout and eat some sugary stuff up to work to make me quickly recover from my sweaty workout and make me have enough energy feel my body throughout the day.

✓ I eat some quickly digesting carbs and protein before my workout to support me throughout, and eat some sugary stuff after my workout to help me quickly recover from my sweaty workout and have enough energy to fuel my body throughout the day.

The use of 'will' is inappropriate here as the student is describing habitual actions, so the simple present tense is correct. Also, 'quick digesting' should be 'quickly digesting' (adverb modifying verb), 'up to work' is incorrect preposition usage and should be 'after my workout', and 'make me have enough energy feel my body' is ungrammatical and corrected to 'have enough energy to fuel my body'.

× eat some sugary stuff up to work to make me quickly recover from my sweaty workout

✓ eat some sugary stuff after my workout to help me quickly recover from my sweaty workout

The preposition 'up to work' is incorrect in this context; the correct preposition is 'after my workout' to indicate the time when the sugary snacks are eaten.

× any crackers that is salty because I am a savory person

✓ any crackers that are salty because I am a savory person

The subject 'crackers' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× the black crackers on top of it is semi sweet and it's not too overwhelming

✓ the black crackers on top of it are semi-sweet and they're not too overwhelming

'Crackers' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'semi sweet' should be hyphenated as 'semi-sweet' as it is a compound adjective.