Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors that affect naturalness and clarity. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using correct verb tenses and linking words to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within five sentences.

Example: I usually eat snacks in the mid-afternoon, around 3 or 4 PM. This is because I often feel hungry after waking up from a nap. Eating a small snack at this time helps boost my energy and makes me feel refreshed.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas and ensure subject-verb agreement. Also, be consistent in pronoun use and provide specific reasons to support your opinion.

Example: I think it depends on how much you eat. For example, eating too many snacks can lead to obesity. However, having a small amount of snacks can help you feel more refreshed and relaxed.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and confusing phrases. Try to give a direct answer followed by specific supporting details. Use correct verb tenses and avoid repetition. Clarify your ideas to make your response more natural and effective.

Example: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. For example, I used to eat snacks every night because they were my favourite food. Also, my parents sometimes gave me snacks as a reward to motivate me.

Suggestion: Your answer is quite good but could be improved by correcting minor grammatical errors and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, ensure subject-verb agreement and avoid redundancy for a more natural and effective response.

Example: I enjoy eating a variety of snacks, but my favourites are fruits, especially apples and oranges. They are not only delicious but also healthy because they provide natural sugars and vitamins, which help enhance my well-being.

× Whilst I now and then is night in the mid afternoon from around 3:00 PM or 4:00 PM because after I waking up I feel very hungry.

✓ I sometimes eat snacks in the mid-afternoon, around 3:00 PM or 4:00 PM, because after I wake up I feel very hungry.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'is' and 'waking up' which are not appropriate in this context. 'Is' is a third person singular verb and does not fit with 'I'. 'Waking up' should be in the base form 'wake up' after 'after'. The sentence also needs restructuring for clarity and correct tense usage.

× This I want to eat a small snack because it's have me boost my energy and make me feel refreshed.

✓ Therefore, I want to eat a small snack because it helps me boost my energy and makes me feel refreshed.

The phrase 'it's have me' is incorrect; 'it' should be followed by 'helps' (third person singular present tense) and 'makes' to agree with the subject. Also, 'This' is not appropriate here; 'Therefore' or 'So' fits better to connect ideas.

× I think it's depend on the amount of snacks you eat.

✓ I think it depends on the amount of snacks you eat.

The verb 'depend' needs to be in the third person singular present tense 'depends' to agree with the subject 'it'. 'It's' (it is) is incorrect here.

× For example if you eat a lot of snacks in a day it can lead to obesity.

✓ For example, if you eat a lot of snacks in a day, it can lead to obesity.

The sentence is mostly correct but needs commas for clarity. No singular/plural error here, but punctuation improves readability.

× But it's you eat a small amount of snack it helps you more refresh and make me more relaxed.

✓ But if you eat a small amount of snacks, it helps you feel more refreshed and makes you more relaxed.

'Snack' should be plural 'snacks' to match 'a small amount of'. 'More refresh' should be 'more refreshed' (adjective form). Also, 'make me' should be 'makes you' to maintain consistent pronouns.

× Once I was the case I over each night because it's my favorite food and when I had a last call my my parents often gave me as nice as a gift to improve my motivation.

✓ When I was young, I often ate snacks at night because they were my favorite food, and when I had a last call, my parents often gave me snacks as a gift to improve my motivation.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'Once I was the case' is unclear and replaced with 'When I was young'. 'Over each' is incorrect; 'ate snacks' is correct past tense. 'It's' should be 'they were' to agree with plural 'snacks'. 'As nice as a gift' is corrected to 'snacks as a gift'. Also, 'my my' is a typo.

× I love eating a variety of snacks but my favorite would have to be a fruit, especially apple and orange.

✓ I love eating a variety of snacks, but my favorites would have to be fruits, especially apples and oranges.

'A fruit' should be plural 'fruits' to match 'a variety of snacks'. 'Apple and orange' should be plural 'apples and oranges' to be consistent.

× They are not only delicious but also healthy, providing natural sugars and vitamins and is help me enhance my well-being.

✓ They are not only delicious but also healthy, providing natural sugars and vitamins, and they help me enhance my well-being.

'Is help me' is incorrect; it should be 'they help me' to agree with plural subject 'they'. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate clauses.