Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details with linking words like 'for example' or 'such as'.

Example: I usually eat snacks when I'm watching a movie, listening to music, or chatting with friends. For example, having a small, tasty snack makes me feel relaxed and more enjoyable during these activities.

Suggestion: Your answer is generally good but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer sentence structure. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and try to use linking words such as 'however' to contrast ideas.

Example: I think it depends on the type of snacks you choose. For example, fruits and nuts are healthy snacks that provide essential nutrients, whereas greasy snacks are unhealthy and should be avoided.

Suggestion: Your answer is personal and detailed but could be more concise and structured. Avoid informal phrases like 'I mean' and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. In fact, I was so fond of them that I used to sneak out in the evenings to eat snacks, which unfortunately led to dental problems.

Suggestion: This is a well-structured and clear answer. To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary and add a linking phrase to enhance coherence.

Example: When I was young, I enjoyed greasy and fried snacks because they tasted good and were easily available. However, nowadays I prefer healthier options such as fruits and nuts since they provide important nutrients and help me stay fit throughout the day.

× Well I I usually snacks when I'm watching a movie, listening to music or even chatting with friends for example.

✓ Well I usually snack when I'm watching a movie, listening to music or even chatting with friends for example.

The verb 'snacks' is incorrectly used here. After the subject 'I', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'snack' is correct instead of 'snacks'. This is a singular and plural issue because 'snacks' is a plural noun or third person singular verb form, but here it should be the base verb form for first person singular.

× Just imagine having a small tasty private can.

✓ Just imagine having a small tasty private can of snacks.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'of snacks' clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence structure. Without it, the phrase 'private can' is ambiguous and does not convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I think that it depends on what type of snacks you choose to eat as nowadays there are two types of snacks which are healthy and unhealthy options.

✓ I think that it depends on what type of snack you choose to eat as nowadays there are two types of snacks which are healthy and unhealthy options.

The phrase 'what type of snacks' should be singular 'what type of snack' because 'type' is singular and should be followed by a singular noun. This is a singular and plural issue.

× For example, fruits and nuts are umm, healthy snacks which can provide nutrients for your bodies while greasy cannot.

✓ For example, fruits and nuts are umm, healthy snacks which can provide nutrients for your body while greasy snacks cannot.

The word 'bodies' should be singular 'body' because the sentence is addressing the listener directly in singular form. Also, 'greasy' is an adjective and needs a noun to modify; adding 'snacks' after 'greasy' corrects the sentence. These are singular and plural issues and incorrect use of adjectives.

× I was addicted to snacks when I was a little girl.

✓ I was addicted to snacks when I was a little girl.

This sentence is correct in past tense and needs no correction.

× And I mean, I so like it to the extent that I used to have a habit of sneaking out to eat snacks in the evening, which unfortunately caused some dental problems, which was quite ironic.

✓ And I mean, I liked it so much to the extent that I used to have a habit of sneaking out to eat snacks in the evening, which unfortunately caused some dental problems, which was quite ironic.

The phrase 'I so like it' is incorrect in past context; it should be 'I liked it so much' to match the past tense narrative. This is a sentence structure and past tense issue.

× Well, when I was young, I used to enjoy eating greasy and fried snacks because they taste good and were easily available.

✓ Well, when I was young, I used to enjoy eating greasy and fried snacks because they tasted good and were easily available.

The verb 'taste' should be in past tense 'tasted' to agree with the past tense context 'used to enjoy'. This is a past tense issue.

× However, now I prefer healthier options like fruits and nuts because I realized they provide important nutrients and help me stay fit throughout the day.

✓ However, now I prefer healthier options like fruits and nuts because I realize they provide important nutrients and help me stay fit throughout the day.

The verb 'realized' should be in present tense 'realize' to match the present tense context indicated by 'now' and 'prefer'. This is a present tense issue.