Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to use plural form correctly and add more details to make your answer natural and effective. For example, mention specific times or reasons for eating snacks.

Example: I usually eat snacks in the morning, around 10 am, with a glass of milk and some cookies because it gives me energy for the day.

Suggestion: Focus on grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about why snacks can be healthy.

Example: Yes, I think eating snacks like fruits and nuts in the morning is healthy because they provide essential nutrients and keep the body energized.

Suggestion: Use past tense consistently and avoid filler words. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific examples using linking words.

Example: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. For instance, my mother gave me cookies, fruits, or milk with nuts every morning before school.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and improve sentence coherence by using linking words. Be specific and organise your answer clearly.

Example: I like many types of snacks. For example, I sometimes eat chips, but I prefer healthier options like fruits such as apples, bananas, and oranges. Among nuts, almonds are my favourite.

× I usually eat snack in the morning with milk and cookie.

✓ I usually eat snacks in the morning with milk and cookies.

The nouns 'snack' and 'cookie' should be in plural form 'snacks' and 'cookies' because the sentence refers to eating more than one item or a general habit involving multiple items.

× Yes, I think eats snacks is healthy like most of the people eat the fruits, nuts in the morning.

✓ Yes, I think eating snacks is healthy like most people eat fruits and nuts in the morning.

The verb 'eats' is incorrectly used after 'I think'. Instead, the gerund 'eating' should be used to function as the subject of the sentence. Also, 'most of the people' is better as 'most people' and 'the fruits, nuts' should be 'fruits and nuts' without 'the'.

× To be honest, I often eat snacks.

✓ To be honest, I often ate snacks.

The question is about past habits ('Did you often eat snacks when you were young?'), so the verb should be in past tense 'ate' instead of present tense 'eat'.

× When I was young my mother uh, daily gave me snack in the morning when I went to the school.

✓ When I was young, my mother daily gave me snacks in the morning when I went to school.

The noun 'snack' should be plural 'snacks' to indicate multiple items. Also, 'the school' is incorrect here; it should be 'school' without 'the' when referring to going to school in general.

× I eat cookies some time, fruits sometime milk with any snack like nuts.

✓ I ate cookies sometimes, fruits, and milk with snacks like nuts.

The sentence refers to past habits, so the verb should be in past tense 'ate'. Also, 'some time' and 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' as an adverb. The sentence structure is improved by adding commas and conjunctions for clarity.

× I like many types of snacks like chips as well sometime and umm in nutrients options I like fruits, apple, banana, orange and many others.

✓ I like many types of snacks like chips as well sometimes, and in nutritious options, I like fruits such as apples, bananas, oranges, and many others.

The adverb 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Nutrients options' is incorrect; it should be 'nutritious options'. The fruits 'apple, banana, orange' should be pluralized as 'apples, bananas, oranges' when referring to types of fruits.

× And in nuts, almonds is my favorite.

✓ And among nuts, almonds are my favorite.

'Almonds' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'in nuts' is better expressed as 'among nuts' to indicate preference within a group.