Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and correct expressions like 'health conscious' instead of 'health conscience'. Also, avoid redundancy such as 'whole day' and 'occasionally' in the same context. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: I am quite health conscious, so I usually eat snacks only occasionally, especially during social gatherings with friends or family. This helps me maintain my fitness and achieve my health goals.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding linking words and more specific details. Also, use correct quantifiers like 'a lot of' instead of 'lot of'. Try to expand your answer slightly to make it more natural and effective.

Example: I think eating snacks is generally unhealthy because they contain a lot of processed sugar and calories. Therefore, I prefer eating fruits, which are healthier and provide essential nutrients.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use past tense consistently and correct expressions like 'as far as I remember' and 'being a child'. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: As far as I remember, when I was a child, I used to eat a lot of snacks throughout the day. Being a child, I did not know how harmful they could be.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical errors. Use correct tenses and clearer sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy and be more specific about your current preferences. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: I generally don't eat snacks now that I am grown up. However, if I am in the mood, I like to eat sweet dishes such as gulab jamun or rasgulla, which I also enjoyed during my childhood.

× Since I am a quite health conscience, I don't prefer to eat snacks whole day.

✓ Since I am quite health conscious, I don't prefer to eat snacks the whole day.

The phrase 'health conscience' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'health conscious'. Also, 'a quite' is incorrect; 'quite' is an adverb and does not need 'a'. Additionally, 'whole day' should be preceded by the definite article 'the' to specify the entire day.

× I rather eat them occasionally or when social gathering with friends or family to maintain my fitness and achieve my goals.

✓ I rather eat them occasionally or during social gatherings with friends or family to maintain my fitness and achieve my goals.

The phrase 'when social gathering' is incorrect; it should be 'during social gatherings' to correctly use the preposition and plural form for events.

× Eating snacks is not healthy as they contain lot of processed sugar and lot of calories.

✓ Eating snacks is not healthy as they contain a lot of processed sugar and a lot of calories.

The phrase 'lot of' requires the article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct: 'a lot of'.

× As far I remember in my childhood, I have a habit to eat lot of snacks throughout the day.

✓ As far as I remember, in my childhood, I had a habit of eating a lot of snacks throughout the day.

The phrase 'lot of snacks' needs 'a' before 'lot'. Also, 'have a habit to eat' is incorrect; it should be 'had a habit of eating' to match past tense and correct verb form.

× Being a children, I don't know how harmful they are.

✓ Being a child, I didn't know how harmful they were.

'Children' is plural; the singular 'child' is correct here. Also, the tense should be past ('didn't know') to match the time frame.

× I generally don't eat snacks whenever I grown up.

✓ I generally don't eat snacks now that I have grown up.

The phrase 'whenever I grown up' is incorrect; it should be 'now that I have grown up' to express the present situation after growing up.

× In my childhood I had a habit to consume lot of snacks but now I if I had a mood I basically ate some sweet dish like gulab, jamun or rasgulla.

✓ In my childhood, I had a habit of consuming a lot of snacks, but now if I am in the mood, I basically eat some sweet dishes like gulab jamun or rasgulla.

'Habit to consume' should be 'habit of consuming'. 'Lot of' needs 'a'. 'If I had a mood' is incorrect; it should be 'if I am in the mood' for present tense. 'Ate' should be 'eat' to match present habitual action. Also, 'gulab, jamun' should be 'gulab jamun' as one sweet dish, and 'sweet dish' should be plural 'sweet dishes'.